Without my dream
A beautiful dream.35 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Dreaming is one of those elusive things about sleep where we have no control and the state of our mind seems to control our nights, I never remember my dreams, love Dolly x
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Dreaming is one of those elusive things about sleep where we have no control and the state of our mind seems to control our nights, I never remember my dreams, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-May-2019
Comment from Beri Bee
A totally gorgeous poem! I read it on the contest page! I'd be no place without my dream! This is such a beautiful line and can be taken in more than one way, as you know! Well done! Best of luck in the contest!
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A totally gorgeous poem! I read it on the contest page! I'd be no place without my dream! This is such a beautiful line and can be taken in more than one way, as you know! Well done! Best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 01-May-2019
Comment from Stephanie Joulin
This is an absolutely fantastic poem. You have created wonderful imagery with a beautiful sing-song flow. I enjoyed reading your poem and loved that you played with the stars.
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This is an absolutely fantastic poem. You have created wonderful imagery with a beautiful sing-song flow. I enjoyed reading your poem and loved that you played with the stars.
Comment Written 01-May-2019
Comment from Holly Buss
I have moments like this, where I look upon my life and see that my dreams may be more interesting than my life. I think you also mean Jupiter not Juniper when you say you've been into space in your dreams. Also, it seems like your dreams are way more exciting than mine.
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I have moments like this, where I look upon my life and see that my dreams may be more interesting than my life. I think you also mean Jupiter not Juniper when you say you've been into space in your dreams. Also, it seems like your dreams are way more exciting than mine.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2019
Comment from Lance S. Loria
A lovely rhyming poem about a big dreamer. I enjoyed it very much. I should dream more. The artwork is eye-catching and complimentary. I have no edits or suggestions for adjustments at all. Good job. Good luck in the contest.
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A lovely rhyming poem about a big dreamer. I enjoyed it very much. I should dream more. The artwork is eye-catching and complimentary. I have no edits or suggestions for adjustments at all. Good job. Good luck in the contest.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2019
