Alone?
In The Dark...10 total reviews
Comment from AprilViolet
Alone is such an exceptional poem. I love the way you use the black and white scheme in your presentation. Congratulations on your first place win! You deserve it!
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Alone is such an exceptional poem. I love the way you use the black and white scheme in your presentation. Congratulations on your first place win! You deserve it!
Comment Written 01-May-2019
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Thank you, lovely poet, for such a great review.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Alone?, written in a diminishing iambic heptameter and ABCB rhyme scheme, reveals the soul feeling the cold walls of the insular dwelling. Finding another person to share a life requires leaving the space and accepting the chances we must take to achieve relationship.
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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This poem, Alone?, written in a diminishing iambic heptameter and ABCB rhyme scheme, reveals the soul feeling the cold walls of the insular dwelling. Finding another person to share a life requires leaving the space and accepting the chances we must take to achieve relationship.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Thank you for reading my poem...I really appreciate your opinion. :)
Comment from BJ Frost
This poem paints a vivid Picture of a person with you frightening internal isolation. It truly defines a mental state of loneliness.
The verse with Mom's wisdom is great, though it breaks away from the focus on the internal state of mind..,
Well done.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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This poem paints a vivid Picture of a person with you frightening internal isolation. It truly defines a mental state of loneliness.
The verse with Mom's wisdom is great, though it breaks away from the focus on the internal state of mind..,
Well done.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Thank you for this very nice review. I tend to agree about what you said about the mom comment, it's just that my mom really did say that and it came to mind. Thanks again.
Comment from poetwatch
There is someone for everyone and I hope you find yours. The darkness is a short retreat don't walk that way, for then the beast will laugh as he gets another soul. I like your poem feelings are everything. This is a good entry for the Loneliness contest.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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There is someone for everyone and I hope you find yours. The darkness is a short retreat don't walk that way, for then the beast will laugh as he gets another soul. I like your poem feelings are everything. This is a good entry for the Loneliness contest.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Thank you for reading my poem and for this great review....I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from WryWriter
This poem has a good rhyming scheme. I especially liked stanza five. Attitude and depression can play a role in loneliness. This well-written poem makes that point. I like the photograph you chose for this theme.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2019
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This poem has a good rhyming scheme. I especially liked stanza five. Attitude and depression can play a role in loneliness. This well-written poem makes that point. I like the photograph you chose for this theme.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2019
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Thanks so much, I really appreciate you taking time to read and review my poem.
Comment from 24chas
This was a really good poem. I really loved the flow of it and the dark imagery which really made the message come out in a dramatic way. Nice job of writing.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2019
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This was a really good poem. I really loved the flow of it and the dark imagery which really made the message come out in a dramatic way. Nice job of writing.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2019
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Thank you for this fine review, I really appreciate it.😊
Comment from rspoet
You've written and excellent rhymed poem for the loneliness contest.
That search for someone can be daunting,
even though there may well be 'someone foe everyone.'
Finding them is the trick.
Excellent use of alliteration as the "s" words trickle down the page
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Robert
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2019
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You've written and excellent rhymed poem for the loneliness contest.
That search for someone can be daunting,
even though there may well be 'someone foe everyone.'
Finding them is the trick.
Excellent use of alliteration as the "s" words trickle down the page
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Robert
Comment Written 28-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2019
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem, it's much appreciated.
Comment from Colin John
A warming contest entry about loneliness which must be quite daunting not being in that position myself,but who knows whats around the corner.
Thanks for sharing. Kind regards Colin
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2019
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A warming contest entry about loneliness which must be quite daunting not being in that position myself,but who knows whats around the corner.
Thanks for sharing. Kind regards Colin
Comment Written 28-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2019
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Thank you for taking time to read and review my poem. I always value the opinion of fellow writers.
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Good luck your up to 9
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Playing with shadow may bring in such thought of feeling loneliness, because the truth is not easy to be caught; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2019
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Playing with shadow may bring in such thought of feeling loneliness, because the truth is not easy to be caught; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 28-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2019
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Thank you, for this wonderful review.
Comment from Beri Bee
This is a cleverly written and haunting piece that you've written for the loneliness prompt! With rules I can't understand, is the line that really jumps out at me and feels relateable! Best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2019
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This is a cleverly written and haunting piece that you've written for the loneliness prompt! With rules I can't understand, is the line that really jumps out at me and feels relateable! Best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 28-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2019
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Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.
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I do!
