The black and the White
Black and white stallions fighting for herd.3 total reviews
Comment from moongirlwriter
Oh my goodness. . .it is the survival of the fetus. Yes, one day we all will be replaced by the younger more reslient. It is the way of life for both animal and human. The best of luck with this well-written piece.
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Oh my goodness. . .it is the survival of the fetus. Yes, one day we all will be replaced by the younger more reslient. It is the way of life for both animal and human. The best of luck with this well-written piece.
Comment Written 05-May-2019
Comment from poetwatch
Not a bad comparison two might rivals fighting, for that pound of horseflesh. Seem to me if you could place two politicians in the horses stall--- would we have a free for all? :) This is a good entry for the Rhyme-horse/horses.
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Not a bad comparison two might rivals fighting, for that pound of horseflesh. Seem to me if you could place two politicians in the horses stall--- would we have a free for all? :) This is a good entry for the Rhyme-horse/horses.
Comment Written 01-May-2019
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Thanks for the stars, they are greatly appreciated. For some unknown reason the poem was left out of the contest, why I don't know. Thanks again.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This tells a story about fight in white and black and white stallions and black younger challenging stallion kicked and injured the white stallion; well said, well done. Thanks4sharing. Write2Inspire Changes4Years--DR ALCREATOR
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This tells a story about fight in white and black and white stallions and black younger challenging stallion kicked and injured the white stallion; well said, well done. Thanks4sharing. Write2Inspire Changes4Years--DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 01-May-2019
