Fearless Flying
(A layover with Captain Ted.)11 total reviews
Comment from Richard J
Well, Lady Lisa,
Not only are you one helluva writer, you've a marvelously healthy, uninhibited imagination that thoroughly knows how to pull a man in (pun intended) and keep him immersed and captive until the very end.
Naughty, raunchy fun between two very passionate, consenting adults ... what could be better fantasizing than that.
No doubt, Captain Ted will be looking forward to your next "lay" over ... wink*
Nothing quite like an erotic tryst with a skilled and knowing lady!
Thanks for several delightful grins!
Thanks for sending me to this little scorcher! ~ Richard ; )
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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Well, Lady Lisa,
Not only are you one helluva writer, you've a marvelously healthy, uninhibited imagination that thoroughly knows how to pull a man in (pun intended) and keep him immersed and captive until the very end.
Naughty, raunchy fun between two very passionate, consenting adults ... what could be better fantasizing than that.
No doubt, Captain Ted will be looking forward to your next "lay" over ... wink*
Nothing quite like an erotic tryst with a skilled and knowing lady!
Thanks for several delightful grins!
Thanks for sending me to this little scorcher! ~ Richard ; )
Comment Written 22-May-2019
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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Well now, aren't you an appreciative reviewer. You must cum again.
Now take yourself in hand, pull your pants up and go write a poem your self.
Comment from Mia Twysted
After reading your notes the poem had a different meaning than when I read it through the first time. Without the notes, it feels to me as if someone just wants to do a show and tell with their sex life and after it seems more restricted and shaded.
The language seemed a bit choppy and I had to read it rather slow to be able to put the words together without mumbling or rumbling about.
I wish you good luck.
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reply by the author on 07-May-2019
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After reading your notes the poem had a different meaning than when I read it through the first time. Without the notes, it feels to me as if someone just wants to do a show and tell with their sex life and after it seems more restricted and shaded.
The language seemed a bit choppy and I had to read it rather slow to be able to put the words together without mumbling or rumbling about.
I wish you good luck.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 06-May-2019
reply by the author on 07-May-2019
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Thanks so much for being brave enough to review this. I am glad you read the notes because I didn't want the poem to just be a raunchy rant, but to indicate the background to such uninhibited behaviour by showing how that book had an impact on how women viewed their sexuality.
The choppy lines and rhythms were because they were bouncing around a bit with all that sexual energy!
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I see that now. I could see a picture before and now I can hear the effects that accompany it. That deepens the effect. That's great.
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Some people don't like reading author's notes, but I am of the opinion that some background to how the poem came about is helpful. I always read other writer's notes because they often contain really interesting and thought-provoking stuff.
Comment from trimple
Hi there, Lisa
Oh, this is brilliant!
I've only been a member of the mile high club once, what a high it was! :)
LOve the build-up then the action and the aftermath. lol
I think we've all been there :)
Erica Jong certainly put women's sexuality back on the map.
Thoroughly enjoyed reading this.
Too many lines to repeat lol
kind regards
tracey
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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Hi there, Lisa
Oh, this is brilliant!
I've only been a member of the mile high club once, what a high it was! :)
LOve the build-up then the action and the aftermath. lol
I think we've all been there :)
Erica Jong certainly put women's sexuality back on the map.
Thoroughly enjoyed reading this.
Too many lines to repeat lol
kind regards
tracey
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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I am pleased you are not a prude! I got myself quite steamy writing it. Thanks for the review. (I don't actually think they are doing it aboard the plane; they are on a stopover, a layover. No chandeliers on the plane, unless it is on maybe a Trump jet.)
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Hi, Lisa
Yeah, I think I got abit carried away and was taken back to my own little rump on up there, in Skyland :)
I did realise the situ wasn't on a plane as I read it :)
Good luck!
much love
tracey
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Oh you naughty girl, miss mile high! I would never have had the nerve, just tittilated myself with the thought. Actually, come to think of it, I should have located the action in my story in the cockpit. ( I noticed your use of the word 'cock' in your story. My natural inclination is to use that word too, but I put in 'dick' for the sake of the more US readership.) Although Brits do have 'spotted dick'.
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What actually made it embarrassing is that when we both came out of the loo, there were two people waiting outside and the air hostess who brushed past us, was positively horrified. lol
Meh, What's life if not to seek the pleasures of art and experiments :)
Yeah, Cock is a nicer, grittier term, I think :) I guess we Brits like to bite down on our words :)
I love spotted dick though, with custard of course.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written sexual poem. When the lover is lovable the sex deed is more pleasurable and the combination of the two can take both tho higher levels never reached before.
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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A very well-written sexual poem. When the lover is lovable the sex deed is more pleasurable and the combination of the two can take both tho higher levels never reached before.
Comment Written 04-May-2019
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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That was brave of you to review this. Glad you got the pleasure of the lover being lovable.
Comment from Sandra Elizabeth Williams
This is absolutely fantastic, I wish I had a six for you, Contestant!
So Raunchy, I love it! I love also that you wrote it in segments. Your expressions are awesome, just the kind used at those times. Exceptional job!
Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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This is absolutely fantastic, I wish I had a six for you, Contestant!
So Raunchy, I love it! I love also that you wrote it in segments. Your expressions are awesome, just the kind used at those times. Exceptional job!
Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 04-May-2019
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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Lucky for me you like raunchy! Some would see it as crass and far too explicit, but hey, if it isn't fun, I'm not doing it right. Right?
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Absolutely! This contest calls for this type of openness, so no need to worry.
It was my pleasure to read and review it.
Comment from LG Wolfe
THIS POEM ROCKS! I love it so much for the carnal contest. Your humour comes out in so many ways, poking fun at itself and life in general. Very smart humour and such an enjoyable read.
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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THIS POEM ROCKS! I love it so much for the carnal contest. Your humour comes out in so many ways, poking fun at itself and life in general. Very smart humour and such an enjoyable read.
Comment Written 04-May-2019
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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It's a pity that chandelier broke.
Thank goodness you are one of the folks who can take a poke joke and not get uptight about it being too raunchy and crass.
I appreciate your review very much.
Comment from Kamisah Karim
Very vivid and explicitly written in a poem form.Interesting and the truth it depicted is glaring, especially the after part of it. Funny as well..I like it very much.
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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Very vivid and explicitly written in a poem form.Interesting and the truth it depicted is glaring, especially the after part of it. Funny as well..I like it very much.
Comment Written 04-May-2019
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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Thanks for reviewing. I'm glad its explicit nature did not scare you off, and that you appreciated the truth and humour contained in it.
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I am already married. Nothing can actually scare me about this natural process.
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Oh, great answer!! xx
Comment from LyndaS
Oh Yeah!!! You have hit a home run with me! Forbidden sex on an airplane. Ha! All the way back to..."Coffee, tea or me?" I love the stages that you describe. Before, during and after. This was so much fun to read and gobble up. You don't leave much to the imagine but isn't that the point of this contest? Very nice!! Good luck in the vote. Lynda
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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Oh Yeah!!! You have hit a home run with me! Forbidden sex on an airplane. Ha! All the way back to..."Coffee, tea or me?" I love the stages that you describe. Before, during and after. This was so much fun to read and gobble up. You don't leave much to the imagine but isn't that the point of this contest? Very nice!! Good luck in the vote. Lynda
Comment Written 04-May-2019
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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Careful with that gobbling Lynda!! I am glad you could handle how explicit it is. The only thing left to the imagination is: what sort of food did she get covered in? and perhaps whether that chandelier broke or not.
Comment from L. A. Stanley
Bravo! I blushed while reading this poem! I have never i my life rated a "racy/sexy" poem before, but I'll do my best. I like the way equate flying to lovemaking, the bed to a plane, and Captain Ted to your man/lover. Your rhyming words paint a clear picture. Your last line about Flying United brings it all home. After all, you have to unite in order to "fly!" Good job.
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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Bravo! I blushed while reading this poem! I have never i my life rated a "racy/sexy" poem before, but I'll do my best. I like the way equate flying to lovemaking, the bed to a plane, and Captain Ted to your man/lover. Your rhyming words paint a clear picture. Your last line about Flying United brings it all home. After all, you have to unite in order to "fly!" Good job.
Comment Written 04-May-2019
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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So brave of you to review this utterly shamelessly raunchy read. I was blushing all the time while I was writing it and embarrassed that folks have to click on a warning before reading it. I admire your fortitude. I was seeing how rude I could write it but still stay humorous. I appreciate your generous review.
Comment from 24chas
I remember that book well. My mother had a copy of it that I read when I was ten years old. Admittedly, much of it went over my head, but I knew I enjoyed the read. This poem was a lot of fun. I love the timeline aspect of it and especially the after part. So true and the tag line was perfect. Nice job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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I remember that book well. My mother had a copy of it that I read when I was ten years old. Admittedly, much of it went over my head, but I knew I enjoyed the read. This poem was a lot of fun. I love the timeline aspect of it and especially the after part. So true and the tag line was perfect. Nice job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-May-2019
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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So where's your entry in this contest??
Thanks for your review. Did you nick your mother's copy of the book to read or did she suggest you read it? Quite a precocious read for a 10-yr-old, not surprised it was a bit over your head. These days, 10 yr-olds know everything.
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Oh, I definitely nicked it. I was a very precocious reader. Both of my parents were in books-of-the-month club and I would read them when they were done.
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That's an inspiring background to have. My parents weren't very educated but they made sure I was immersed in books. Dad knew several very long ballads off by heart to recite to me at bedtime and mum always gave me books as presents.
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That's really cool.
