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The Last Laugh

It just takes time.

22 total reviews 
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written poem about envy that can be devastating for ourselves and very destructive for everyone involve. We must learn to accept another's success and find our own to forget what others done to us to benefit themselves.

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 Comment Written 12-May-2019


reply by the author on 12-May-2019
    You are exactly right and I thank you for this review.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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Nature and activation of envy, historically since, as emotion, ever acts, in possessive change and brings in results at par ability; well said, well done. Write to inspire, readable for years -- DR ALCREATOR

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 Comment Written 12-May-2019


reply by the author on 12-May-2019
    Nice of you to write a review, thank you.