The Visitor
Always find a silver lining32 total reviews
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Oh that is just too funny. It would be a great match. =} This is funny and well done, I didn't see any errors. I do hope that you do well in the contest. Rox
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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Oh that is just too funny. It would be a great match. =} This is funny and well done, I didn't see any errors. I do hope that you do well in the contest. Rox
Comment Written 14-May-2019
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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Thank you, Rox. I love your feedback.
Comment from misscookie
Oh my goodness this is wild
You captured my attention first by the man in the photo
Than as I read your wacky poem
I couldn't stop laugh
this is what I call a food for thought poem( love comes to many in very strange ways
Thank you for sharing and for the chuckle
Cookie
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Oh my goodness this is wild
You captured my attention first by the man in the photo
Than as I read your wacky poem
I couldn't stop laugh
this is what I call a food for thought poem( love comes to many in very strange ways
Thank you for sharing and for the chuckle
Cookie
Comment Written 14-May-2019
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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I'm glad you liked it, Cookie. Thanks for the very fun review.
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Your very welcome
Cookie
Comment from Patty Palmer
This poem brings on the feeling of growing old and not remembering who people are. Then, there is the complication of becoming blind which comes at times with deaf. Doesn't sound like much fun. Yes, they would make a perfect couple. It would be a marriage made in heaven because if neither knows what the other is doing or thinking nor could see or hear each other there wouldn't be anything to argue about!
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This poem brings on the feeling of growing old and not remembering who people are. Then, there is the complication of becoming blind which comes at times with deaf. Doesn't sound like much fun. Yes, they would make a perfect couple. It would be a marriage made in heaven because if neither knows what the other is doing or thinking nor could see or hear each other there wouldn't be anything to argue about!
Comment Written 14-May-2019
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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Whatever it takes to avoid arguments! That's what we're all going for!
Thanks for the terrific review, Patricia.
Comment from victor 66
Mystery author, this poem has very good rhythm, very good Rhyme and reads very smoothly. And also, it has a philosophy that all families should possess. This was a fun read!
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Mystery author, this poem has very good rhythm, very good Rhyme and reads very smoothly. And also, it has a philosophy that all families should possess. This was a fun read!
Comment Written 14-May-2019
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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I appreciate your saying that, Victor. It brightened my day.
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You are most welcome.
Comment from 24chas
I love this story, unknown writer. I bet he looked at her askance when she said that. What a great sense of humor. Oh, that we could all deal with our setbacks with gentle humor like this lady did. Great story and good luck in the contest.
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I love this story, unknown writer. I bet he looked at her askance when she said that. What a great sense of humor. Oh, that we could all deal with our setbacks with gentle humor like this lady did. Great story and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-May-2019
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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If she could have, I bet she would have looked askance right back at him...
Thanks for the fun review, 24chas.
Comment from RodG
A delightful story. One wonders what would happen if it were true. How would they communicate? Touch? Thank you for giving this situation a silver lining. Rod
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A delightful story. One wonders what would happen if it were true. How would they communicate? Touch? Thank you for giving this situation a silver lining. Rod
Comment Written 14-May-2019
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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Touching speaks volumes. No doubt about that. I think you are definitely onto something, RodG! Great view; thanks.
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My pleasure. Rod
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought you did a good job with this. Not sure we need to know it's your aunt. That kinda stood out to me. But the poem was fun to read. Told a story in a unique way. Nice use of rhyme as well.
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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I thought you did a good job with this. Not sure we need to know it's your aunt. That kinda stood out to me. But the poem was fun to read. Told a story in a unique way. Nice use of rhyme as well.
Comment Written 14-May-2019
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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I thought without her being a relative, it would seem a bit insensitive and possibly even crass. But in our family, that's just our sense of humor. Still, I'm always appreciative when a reviewer gives me honest feedback, so thank you, Michael, very much.
Comment from Raul1
I don't know what glaucoma is, but I bet it is a bad disease. Poor woman that she had that dreadful pain in her body. I like this poem because it's something else different to read. Thanks for sharing!
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I don't know what glaucoma is, but I bet it is a bad disease. Poor woman that she had that dreadful pain in her body. I like this poem because it's something else different to read. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 14-May-2019
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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Glaucoma is a disease that leaves you blind.
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Oh. Thanks for telling me.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the visitor who was speach and hearing impaired to a blind person who could not read his sign, it seems to be a good match the one who cannot see will not see his wrong doings and the one who cannot hear or speak will not be able to scold her.
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A very well-written poem about the visitor who was speach and hearing impaired to a blind person who could not read his sign, it seems to be a good match the one who cannot see will not see his wrong doings and the one who cannot hear or speak will not be able to scold her.
Comment Written 14-May-2019
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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Yep! That's exactly what my aunt thought!
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a charming write, a fun read in its warm humor, written in smooth rhyming rhythm, and fully compliant with the prompt. Best of luck in the contest with this clever poem...
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In my opinion, a charming write, a fun read in its warm humor, written in smooth rhyming rhythm, and fully compliant with the prompt. Best of luck in the contest with this clever poem...
Comment Written 14-May-2019
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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Thank you for this lovely feedback!
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You are welcome indeed...Eve
