Of Mermaids and Monsters
A Loop Poem on a Writer's Imagination18 total reviews
Comment from nancy_e_davis
This is a well done Loop Poem, June. You picked a great picture or was it the inspiration for the poem.? The presentation is very pleasing as well as the subject matter. Food for thought which is what every writer needs. A good imagination. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 17-May-2019
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This is a well done Loop Poem, June. You picked a great picture or was it the inspiration for the poem.? The presentation is very pleasing as well as the subject matter. Food for thought which is what every writer needs. A good imagination. Nancy:)
Comment Written 17-May-2019
reply by the author on 17-May-2019
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Thanks for stopping by to read and review. I work in Salem and live near Essex here in Massachusetts. So, we're surrounded by old New England tales of witches, serpents and have actually worked on an historical site reputed to be haunted by the sheriff who hung the witches. So, lots of food for here for creative writing!
Comment from Mrs. KT
Good Morning, June!
How I appreciate the contents of your Loop Poem. There are, indeed, "Dragons who dwell in the caverns of a writer's mind." What a moving an interesting line of poetry! Our imaginations take us to the depths of despair and the heights of creativity. And the results can have devastating and/or enlightening effects.
I am so pleased you did not disable this exceptional write.
And I love your city of Salem... despite its history of witches and warlocks. Always found that part of American history fascinating.
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 17-May-2019
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Good Morning, June!
How I appreciate the contents of your Loop Poem. There are, indeed, "Dragons who dwell in the caverns of a writer's mind." What a moving an interesting line of poetry! Our imaginations take us to the depths of despair and the heights of creativity. And the results can have devastating and/or enlightening effects.
I am so pleased you did not disable this exceptional write.
And I love your city of Salem... despite its history of witches and warlocks. Always found that part of American history fascinating.
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 17-May-2019
reply by the author on 17-May-2019
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You got what I was trying to convey - the mind of the writer can hold so much subconsciously that you never know what will surface and end up in a poem! Thanks for stopping by. Always nice to hear from you.
Comment from izzyboy
It took me back to the Viking era and they had lacey undergarments back then I hope. I think that it would be best read out loud.The rhythms and line endings would work well that way.
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It took me back to the Viking era and they had lacey undergarments back then I hope. I think that it would be best read out loud.The rhythms and line endings would work well that way.
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Comment Written 17-May-2019
Comment from Freeflying
What a great ride touching writing history of fanatsy and/or legend or just pure wistful imagination. Using sestina form added a rhythm to the flow of words.
Great job.
Flyfree.
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What a great ride touching writing history of fanatsy and/or legend or just pure wistful imagination. Using sestina form added a rhythm to the flow of words.
Great job.
Flyfree.
Comment Written 17-May-2019
reply by the author on 17-May-2019
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Thank you for dropping by to read and share your insights - yours were on point!
Comment from Sandra Montanino
You've written a very powerful poem. I can see why you are number 28 as a recognized accomplished poet. I absolutely love your last line: Dragons who dwell deep in the caverns of a writer's mind. This is so true and we never know what we are capable of writing until we sit in front of our computers and the juices flow. Good luck in your contest.
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You've written a very powerful poem. I can see why you are number 28 as a recognized accomplished poet. I absolutely love your last line: Dragons who dwell deep in the caverns of a writer's mind. This is so true and we never know what we are capable of writing until we sit in front of our computers and the juices flow. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 17-May-2019
reply by the author on 17-May-2019
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Thank you for dropping by to read and share your insights - yours were on point!
Comment from Tootie
This is so very different and I really enjoyed reading it. "...to the heights of our imaginations..." - love it! Well-written and great presentation. Wishing you the best in the loop poetry contest. Blessings, Cathy
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This is so very different and I really enjoyed reading it. "...to the heights of our imaginations..." - love it! Well-written and great presentation. Wishing you the best in the loop poetry contest. Blessings, Cathy
Comment Written 17-May-2019
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Thank you for dropping by to read and share your insights - yours were on point!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A mysterious world of miracles and witches here in your fantasy write with a magical touch of fearful dragons and danger, I enjoyed your loop June, you took me to another time and place here, love Dolly x
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A mysterious world of miracles and witches here in your fantasy write with a magical touch of fearful dragons and danger, I enjoyed your loop June, you took me to another time and place here, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 16-May-2019
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Thank you for dropping by to read and share your insights - yours were on point!
Comment from Raul1
This poem is very creative and interesting. There is a lot going on in this poem. I like how you structured it. Thanks for sharing! Good luck in the contest!
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This poem is very creative and interesting. There is a lot going on in this poem. I like how you structured it. Thanks for sharing! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 16-May-2019
