Know When to Fold'Em
My very First Limericks19 total reviews
Comment from Willie P. Smith
Excellent, brought back some of the old shows I enjoyed so much. Your rhyme is very good, the story is good. A very fun and entertaining read.
You did an excellent job on this entry.
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Excellent, brought back some of the old shows I enjoyed so much. Your rhyme is very good, the story is good. A very fun and entertaining read.
You did an excellent job on this entry.
Comment Written 18-May-2019
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my work.
Comment from nor84
I wanted to give you a heads up. I'm not a poet, so I did not check anything but the number of stanzas. Contest rules say: Write A fun limerick about your favorite card game with A format of FIVE Lines with aabba rhyme scheme.
Instead of a limerick, which always has five lines, you have a poem with multiple 5-line stanzas. there's still time to fix it. good luck.
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reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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I wanted to give you a heads up. I'm not a poet, so I did not check anything but the number of stanzas. Contest rules say: Write A fun limerick about your favorite card game with A format of FIVE Lines with aabba rhyme scheme.
Instead of a limerick, which always has five lines, you have a poem with multiple 5-line stanzas. there's still time to fix it. good luck.
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Comment Written 17-May-2019
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Thanks, i got rid of two of them. I took third.
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent series of limericks for the contest
Not bad for a first attempt.
I like the first one the best.
Haven't heard Bret Maverick mentioned in a long time
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Robert
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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You've written an excellent series of limericks for the contest
Not bad for a first attempt.
I like the first one the best.
Haven't heard Bret Maverick mentioned in a long time
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Robert
Comment Written 17-May-2019
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Thank you Robert. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Cindy Warren
Yeah, I'd shoot a cheater too. I suppose Bart will eventually catch up with Bret. But aren't there four aces? Thanks for a fun read. I enjoyed it. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Yeah, I'd shoot a cheater too. I suppose Bart will eventually catch up with Bret. But aren't there four aces? Thanks for a fun read. I enjoyed it. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-May-2019
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my work.
Comment from LIJ Red
With that prompt the old 999559 anapestic fears are out, and your entry satisfies the prompt, and the stories are clear cut, so, good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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With that prompt the old 999559 anapestic fears are out, and your entry satisfies the prompt, and the stories are clear cut, so, good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-May-2019
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from royowen
Well done with entry in this five card stud, Limerick contest, usually in the long lines, you had seven syllables, normally they would be 8-10, the shorter lines being six are good, a little off meter, it depends on strong and weak stresses, EG.
Now, there once was a gambler with soul, (9)
Through his forehead there was a big hole (9)
With disgust on their face (6)
While he sharked a third ace (6)
Well, they shot him four times for his roll. (9)
Well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Well done with entry in this five card stud, Limerick contest, usually in the long lines, you had seven syllables, normally they would be 8-10, the shorter lines being six are good, a little off meter, it depends on strong and weak stresses, EG.
Now, there once was a gambler with soul, (9)
Through his forehead there was a big hole (9)
With disgust on their face (6)
While he sharked a third ace (6)
Well, they shot him four times for his roll. (9)
Well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 17-May-2019
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Thank you Roy. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
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Welcome
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Limerick suite about the card players that crook one way or another to win a game of cards. When they are caught out they will not live long to tell the tale or go in hiding fearing his life.
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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A very well-written Limerick suite about the card players that crook one way or another to win a game of cards. When they are caught out they will not live long to tell the tale or go in hiding fearing his life.
Comment Written 17-May-2019
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my work.
Comment from Jennie Phelps
I think you did a fantastic job of limerick writing. And the topic catches my fancy', as I am an avid poker player. Playing in a tournament tonight in fact. Anyways, I enjoyed the read immensely. Your flow is good, and choice of words too notch. Best of wishes.
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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I think you did a fantastic job of limerick writing. And the topic catches my fancy', as I am an avid poker player. Playing in a tournament tonight in fact. Anyways, I enjoyed the read immensely. Your flow is good, and choice of words too notch. Best of wishes.
Comment Written 17-May-2019
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks funny habits and fashions about poker playing and treat and challenges in playing by players; well said, well done. Write to inspire -- DR ALCREATOR
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reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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This speaks funny habits and fashions about poker playing and treat and challenges in playing by players; well said, well done. Write to inspire -- DR ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 17-May-2019
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Thank you very much.
