Stop being so catty
Don't say things that you may later regret9 total reviews
Comment from susand3022
Hello Author, This is really cute. I like the second line especially, life is too short and you have only nine... lol that's funny. We're always telling ourselves that we only live once... Oh to be a cat!
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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Hello Author, This is really cute. I like the second line especially, life is too short and you have only nine... lol that's funny. We're always telling ourselves that we only live once... Oh to be a cat!
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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I really appreciate your great review.
Comment from WryWriter
LOL! This poem is delightful! I love your artwork choice for this theme. I count 2-10-2 syllable lines as per writing prompt requirement. Enjoyed!
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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LOL! This poem is delightful! I love your artwork choice for this theme. I count 2-10-2 syllable lines as per writing prompt requirement. Enjoyed!
Comment Written 22-May-2019
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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Many thanks. Much appreciated.
Comment from Mia Twysted
Oh, if cats really had nine lives. It is most cats that do teach you to enjoy the calmer and quieter side of life. At least when they are older.
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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Oh, if cats really had nine lives. It is most cats that do teach you to enjoy the calmer and quieter side of life. At least when they are older.
Comment Written 22-May-2019
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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Many thanks
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
He he he, this made me smile and at least cats do have nine lives! Unliked us who make do with one! This presentation is cute, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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He he he, this made me smile and at least cats do have nine lives! Unliked us who make do with one! This presentation is cute, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-May-2019
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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Many thanks. Dolly. X
Comment from Michele Harber
This is adorable, from the photo to the wording to the idea that even nine lives are too short. This is an excellent entry in the 2-10-2 Syllable Contest. Just one proofing point: "too" in "too short" should have two "o's." Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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This is adorable, from the photo to the wording to the idea that even nine lives are too short. This is an excellent entry in the 2-10-2 Syllable Contest. Just one proofing point: "too" in "too short" should have two "o's." Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-May-2019
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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Thanks a lot for the review and for spotting my silly mistake.
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You?re welcome, and no problem. I?ve been proofing as part of my job for over 30 years, and that?s one of the more common errors.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-Good image and suggestion
in line one.
-The message in line two
is a good one;lives are often too short.
-Supposedly, the cat gets nine!
-Good point in the concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.
Note: you might want to change
to [too short]
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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-Nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-Good image and suggestion
in line one.
-The message in line two
is a good one;lives are often too short.
-Supposedly, the cat gets nine!
-Good point in the concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.
Note: you might want to change
to [too short]
Comment Written 21-May-2019
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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Thanks for the review and for spotting my silly mistake
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You are quite welcome.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is really cute and funny. I like the message conveyed and the clever wording you've used. You say something about being catty and then you use cats in your accompanying artwork. Priceless! This was fun to read and I enjoyed this well written offering. Well done!
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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This is really cute and funny. I like the message conveyed and the clever wording you've used. You say something about being catty and then you use cats in your accompanying artwork. Priceless! This was fun to read and I enjoyed this well written offering. Well done!
Comment Written 21-May-2019
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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Many tha ks for the great review
Comment from Bleeshor
Isn't it amazing how much can be said with so few syllables? This was a cute symbolic poem about cats.
But really the poet is asking us all to check our anger-and just try to be kind
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Isn't it amazing how much can be said with so few syllables? This was a cute symbolic poem about cats.
But really the poet is asking us all to check our anger-and just try to be kind
Comment Written 21-May-2019
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Many thanks
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Metaphorically expressed, the message is clearly conveyed, that we should not speak the words for which we regret later; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Metaphorically expressed, the message is clearly conveyed, that we should not speak the words for which we regret later; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 21-May-2019
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Many thanks
