Peas In A Pod
There's no denying where you fit in best45 total reviews
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is really good. I like the descriptive wording you've used to describe every element of the family. The choice of title is excellent and is what family is. The rhyme and flow of this is superb. This was a joy to read. Great job and well done!
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This is really good. I like the descriptive wording you've used to describe every element of the family. The choice of title is excellent and is what family is. The rhyme and flow of this is superb. This was a joy to read. Great job and well done!
Comment Written 28-May-2019
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Thank you for this delightful review. I loved it.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your words are descriptive, Mystery Author. I enjoyed your contest entry. Your words are descriptive with good rhymes. I like the verse about the dog. Good job and thanks for sharing. Best wishes. Jan
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Your words are descriptive, Mystery Author. I enjoyed your contest entry. Your words are descriptive with good rhymes. I like the verse about the dog. Good job and thanks for sharing. Best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 28-May-2019
reply by the author on 28-May-2019
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Yes, Charles the Dog has been a big hit with the reviewers! (well, but then, compared to a teeth-grinding snorer or a procrastinator, I guess that makes sense..) Thank you for the delightful review.
Comment from l.raven
so very true...they can make you nuts at times...
but they can make you feel like gold other times...
mine are red necks...and I wouldn't change them for the world...we have our ups and downs...but there isn't anything we wouldn't do for each other...family is precious...I love your poem...made me smile...and love your picture...very well written...love Linda xxoo
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so very true...they can make you nuts at times...
but they can make you feel like gold other times...
mine are red necks...and I wouldn't change them for the world...we have our ups and downs...but there isn't anything we wouldn't do for each other...family is precious...I love your poem...made me smile...and love your picture...very well written...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 28-May-2019
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Thank you, Linda! It sounds like you have a great family - lots of love and support.
I appreciate your uplifting review.
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I am truly blessed...sounds like you are too...your so very welcome...love xxoo
Comment from Janet Foor
I can certainly relate this to this sentiment. Families are strange for sure. This weekend we have a graduation and the family will be coming to our house for a party afterwards. I can hardy wait.
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I can certainly relate this to this sentiment. Families are strange for sure. This weekend we have a graduation and the family will be coming to our house for a party afterwards. I can hardy wait.
Comment Written 28-May-2019
reply by the author on 28-May-2019
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Maybe it will inspire YOU to write a snarky-yet-sentimental poem, too, Jmf4119!!!!! Enjoy yourself.
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Now that?s a great idea 💡
Comment from June Sargent
Oh, the ties that bind us do make for an interesting family portrait! One we would never trade in, as you could never find another with such a perfect fit. Imperfect, but priceless. Well said.
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Oh, the ties that bind us do make for an interesting family portrait! One we would never trade in, as you could never find another with such a perfect fit. Imperfect, but priceless. Well said.
Comment Written 28-May-2019
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Thanks for the terrific review, June; I appreciate it.
Comment from Rmocruz
It is not difficult to find fault with your own family, familiarity breeds
contempt. Clever word play employed in line two. The verse is solidly rhymed. The photo-art well complements your theme, the message is
pleasant and clear.
Best wishes with this well penned contest entry.
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It is not difficult to find fault with your own family, familiarity breeds
contempt. Clever word play employed in line two. The verse is solidly rhymed. The photo-art well complements your theme, the message is
pleasant and clear.
Best wishes with this well penned contest entry.
Comment Written 28-May-2019
reply by the author on 28-May-2019
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Thanks, Rmocruz! My weird family and I appreciate this review very much! : )
And thanks for the well-wishes with the contest.
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You're welcome, my pleasure.
Comment from Joy Graham
Dear Mystery Poet,
Yeesh! I'm the sister that snores and grinds her teeth. Yep, I'm the black sheep in my family. I can just imagine what some have said about me over the years.
Isn't it true that despite all the faults, there's no place like home among our own people.
Best wishes in this contest. The picture caught my attention to pop in and read.
Joy xx
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Dear Mystery Poet,
Yeesh! I'm the sister that snores and grinds her teeth. Yep, I'm the black sheep in my family. I can just imagine what some have said about me over the years.
Isn't it true that despite all the faults, there's no place like home among our own people.
Best wishes in this contest. The picture caught my attention to pop in and read.
Joy xx
Comment Written 28-May-2019
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Yes! It's all about belonging to a tribe. You accept each other, warts and all.
Thanks very much for all this fun and positive feedback, you little snoring teeth-grinder you!! I appreciate your well-wishes for the contest, too.
Comment from estory
We all have our failings, and that comes across in this humorous little poem looking at those who try our patience, but put up with us as well. I liked the limerick like rhythms, and the echoing rhyme scheme that lifted the mood with the upbeat music of the language. estory
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We all have our failings, and that comes across in this humorous little poem looking at those who try our patience, but put up with us as well. I liked the limerick like rhythms, and the echoing rhyme scheme that lifted the mood with the upbeat music of the language. estory
Comment Written 28-May-2019
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Wow, estory - your review is like poetry!! Thanks for your uplifting words. Very much appreciated.
Comment from Gail Denham
Good job - we love 'em, even when they might irritate. And glad to have them for sure. Thanks for the good reminder - they are our family, come what may.
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Good job - we love 'em, even when they might irritate. And glad to have them for sure. Thanks for the good reminder - they are our family, come what may.
Comment Written 28-May-2019
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Exactly. Warts and all!! I appreciate your review, Gail.
Comment from 24chas
This was a funny piece of writing, unknown writer. I think we all feel that way about our families. But we take them warts and all because we are related by blood. Except for the dog, who seems kind of useless even though he's got a good name. Nice job and good luck in the contest.
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This was a funny piece of writing, unknown writer. I think we all feel that way about our families. But we take them warts and all because we are related by blood. Except for the dog, who seems kind of useless even though he's got a good name. Nice job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-May-2019
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Thanks.
