Peas In A Pod
There's no denying where you fit in best45 total reviews
Comment from LisaMay
This is delightful. It has humor, pathos, criticism, warmth, irritation, ... all those things that speak of family. Absolutely true: Can't live with 'em, can't live without 'em.
reply by the author on 28-May-2019
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This is delightful. It has humor, pathos, criticism, warmth, irritation, ... all those things that speak of family. Absolutely true: Can't live with 'em, can't live without 'em.
Comment Written 28-May-2019
reply by the author on 28-May-2019
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Thank you, LisaMay. I appreciate your positive feedback.
Comment from Heather Knight
I love the title of your poem. And the poem itself is hilarious. However, what you say is true.
Thanks so much for making me laugh. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-May-2019
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I love the title of your poem. And the poem itself is hilarious. However, what you say is true.
Thanks so much for making me laugh. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-May-2019
reply by the author on 28-May-2019
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I'm so happy I gave you a good laugh with this. It made my day to read that. Thanks for the well-wishes in the contest, too.
Comment from Raul1
This is a very good write. I like how you expressed emotions in this poem. Very good work! All the lines rhyme. Great job! No errors in this one. I like your poem.
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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This is a very good write. I like how you expressed emotions in this poem. Very good work! All the lines rhyme. Great job! No errors in this one. I like your poem.
Comment Written 27-May-2019
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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Thanks!
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You're welcome.
Comment from rhonnie69
HELLO POET: You are clever for appreciating and loving your family no matter what. Your family is a tree. You are only a branch on that tree. Separated from it's tree a branch, "CAN NOT," survive. Yes. You are right. With your family you do belong. Stay connected to your family, poet. It's a matter of life or death for you. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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HELLO POET: You are clever for appreciating and loving your family no matter what. Your family is a tree. You are only a branch on that tree. Separated from it's tree a branch, "CAN NOT," survive. Yes. You are right. With your family you do belong. Stay connected to your family, poet. It's a matter of life or death for you. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 27-May-2019
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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Thanks very much, Rhonnie!
Comment from Hitcher
This one made me smile friend, because it made me think of my own family and their individual quirks. Yea, the ones that have the capacity to drive you to distraction and tottering on the edge of madness, ha ha.
But then I remember i have my own quirks which they have learned to live with them too. Nice! It is great to get together with family but also great to get on your way and back to your own life, strange that : ))
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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This one made me smile friend, because it made me think of my own family and their individual quirks. Yea, the ones that have the capacity to drive you to distraction and tottering on the edge of madness, ha ha.
But then I remember i have my own quirks which they have learned to live with them too. Nice! It is great to get together with family but also great to get on your way and back to your own life, strange that : ))
Comment Written 27-May-2019
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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You totally get me, Hitcher. Great review; thanks very much!
Comment from karenina
Ah. This is sweet. A well written poem in five quatrains with a very well done ABXB rhyme scheme and although your lines are mixed syllable count your choice of words makes it flow so smoothly! Aside from all that is the universal truth (in my opinion) that there are times even in the most blissful of families that we wonder if maybe we were adopted -- or wonder if it's too late to be! I smiled...I have as many quirks as my family members which I am sure make them quite mad at times...but we ARE peas in a pod--and in the end--I'm glad I bloomed where I was planted.--Karenina
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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Ah. This is sweet. A well written poem in five quatrains with a very well done ABXB rhyme scheme and although your lines are mixed syllable count your choice of words makes it flow so smoothly! Aside from all that is the universal truth (in my opinion) that there are times even in the most blissful of families that we wonder if maybe we were adopted -- or wonder if it's too late to be! I smiled...I have as many quirks as my family members which I am sure make them quite mad at times...but we ARE peas in a pod--and in the end--I'm glad I bloomed where I was planted.--Karenina
Comment Written 27-May-2019
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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Absolutely awesome review, Karenina; thank you! I couldn't love it more/
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I am routing for you!--Karenina
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, this was such a clever and fun write about family - in smoothly fluid rhyming rhythm, which I thoroughly enjoyed reading. I gave it a Six, because I felt I could do no less with this comic tribute to family, that complied perfectly with the prompt. Best of luck in the contest with this gem...
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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In my opinion, this was such a clever and fun write about family - in smoothly fluid rhyming rhythm, which I thoroughly enjoyed reading. I gave it a Six, because I felt I could do no less with this comic tribute to family, that complied perfectly with the prompt. Best of luck in the contest with this gem...
Comment Written 27-May-2019
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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Thank you for this helpful, specific review.
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You are very welcome - I since corrected my typo, which was not including the word "no" in the line that should have read as follows:
"I could do NO less with this comic tribute to family"...Eve
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I knew that. Not to worry.
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Thank you...
Comment from sharonlshelley
a lovely poem about family with plenty of added humour and you picture is so perfect for the poem you have written. thank you for sharing your work with us
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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a lovely poem about family with plenty of added humour and you picture is so perfect for the poem you have written. thank you for sharing your work with us
Comment Written 27-May-2019
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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Thank you for the nice review! I liked it very, very much!
Comment from damommy
I think this applies to a lot of people, but we still turn to family. This is good rhyming here, and an amusing story to boot. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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I think this applies to a lot of people, but we still turn to family. This is good rhyming here, and an amusing story to boot. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-May-2019
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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Thanks for the encouraging review and for the well-wishes on the contest.
Comment from Dawn Munro
What a wonderful poem! How blessed you are, and how wise to know it. I hope your flawless tribute to an obviously loved family does extremely well in the contest. Good luck!
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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What a wonderful poem! How blessed you are, and how wise to know it. I hope your flawless tribute to an obviously loved family does extremely well in the contest. Good luck!
Comment Written 27-May-2019
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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I appreciate that very much, Dawn. Thank you.
