Peas In A Pod
There's no denying where you fit in best45 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, it is wonderful to take the time to get to know our family, and to realize they are part of us, very well written and presented, best wishes in your contest****kahpot
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Excellent, it is wonderful to take the time to get to know our family, and to realize they are part of us, very well written and presented, best wishes in your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 27-May-2019
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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Thanks, Kahpot! I appreciate the review and also the well-wishes for the contest.
Comment from Sandra Elizabeth Williams
Absolutely! Family... They're ours, we belong to them. I totally enjoyed reading and reviewing this wonderful work, Contestant.
Best wishes in the contest.
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Absolutely! Family... They're ours, we belong to them. I totally enjoyed reading and reviewing this wonderful work, Contestant.
Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 27-May-2019
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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I appreciate this! Thanks for the encouragement, Sandra, and the fun review.
Comment from Patty Palmer
I really liked your poem. It was humorous and the rhyme and rhythm make it so smooth. butt then doesn't everyone have family members that are a bit off? That makes our family ours!
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I really liked your poem. It was humorous and the rhyme and rhythm make it so smooth. butt then doesn't everyone have family members that are a bit off? That makes our family ours!
Comment Written 27-May-2019
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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Absolutely!! No one's family is The Brady Bunch or Ozzie and Harriet! We're ALL "flawed"...but, if you think about that, then it seems that flawed is what's normal!! We should just embrace it.
Thanks for the terrific review, Patricia.
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You're welcome for the review!
Comment from Colin John
Hi Rachelle, this is a great family poem entry and must stand a good chance as all these things we can relate to in our own families, good luck and thanks for sharing. Kind regards Colin X
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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Hi Rachelle, this is a great family poem entry and must stand a good chance as all these things we can relate to in our own families, good luck and thanks for sharing. Kind regards Colin X
Comment Written 27-May-2019
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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Thanks for the nice review, Colin. I always appreciate it.
Comment from DeborahWrite
Dear Author,
I agree, no phenomenon exists like family. No other people can match your family members' knowing you with the greatest depth. I found your poem articulate and clear. Your title and photograph of a pea pod are excellent!
My best,
Deborah
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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Dear Author,
I agree, no phenomenon exists like family. No other people can match your family members' knowing you with the greatest depth. I found your poem articulate and clear. Your title and photograph of a pea pod are excellent!
My best,
Deborah
Comment Written 27-May-2019
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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Thank you very much for this terrific review, Deborah! I love it.
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My pleasure
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent poem and entry for the Family contest
with very good rhymes and meter and a nice touch of humor.
Likely sisters one and two would have some jabs about you as well.
After all, that's what sisters do.
Good choice of peas in a pod theme.
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Robert
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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You've written an excellent poem and entry for the Family contest
with very good rhymes and meter and a nice touch of humor.
Likely sisters one and two would have some jabs about you as well.
After all, that's what sisters do.
Good choice of peas in a pod theme.
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Robert
Comment Written 27-May-2019
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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What?!! How could they POSSIBLY have jabs about me??!! Why, I am CRUSHED at this thought, Robert. Crushed!! : )
Thanks for a delightful review.
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Well, having a "crush" on someone is usually a good thing,
and Orange Crush tastes good,
so maybe being "crushed" is good as well.
Hope you don't get crushed in that pod or in the contest.
Robert
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Hahahaha!! I hope not, too!
Comment from Maudaline Montes
Even if they're sometimes not what you want, or they get on your nerves, they're all you've got. That's something to cherish because not everyone has that kind of support. You conveyed that message wonderfully!! Best of luck in the contest!!! ::)))
Happy Memorial Day!!
-Maudaline Montes
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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Even if they're sometimes not what you want, or they get on your nerves, they're all you've got. That's something to cherish because not everyone has that kind of support. You conveyed that message wonderfully!! Best of luck in the contest!!! ::)))
Happy Memorial Day!!
-Maudaline Montes
Comment Written 27-May-2019
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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Thank you very much for this delightful review, Maudaline. I love it.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This piece is so well-written and moving. You have made excellent use of specific details--mentioning each family member and at least one trait
of each--to complete the picture.
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This piece is so well-written and moving. You have made excellent use of specific details--mentioning each family member and at least one trait
of each--to complete the picture.
Comment Written 27-May-2019
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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Thank you, Janice. This is a really nice review that feels encouraging and warm.
Comment from Hugh McDowell
Excellent. As my sister says when looking at family pictures "It ain't pretty but it's family". Especially love the first two lines and the play on (k)not connected with the "ties that bind". Nice flow and sequence. Hugh
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Excellent. As my sister says when looking at family pictures "It ain't pretty but it's family". Especially love the first two lines and the play on (k)not connected with the "ties that bind". Nice flow and sequence. Hugh
Comment Written 27-May-2019
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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Thank you for noticing that, Hugh!! No one else mentioned it, so I appreciate that a lot. I love your sister's comment! Hahaha.
Thank you for such a nice review.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about family members that can sometimes irritate us with their habits and appearances, but we still love them faults and all.
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A very well-written poem about family members that can sometimes irritate us with their habits and appearances, but we still love them faults and all.
Comment Written 27-May-2019
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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And hopefully they return that favor, right??!
Thank you for this nice review.
