Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Very nice work on this, Ron.
"This life is short and too...??complexed??, ... Could you have possibly meant "complex"?
Oh well, apparently it doesn't matter.
It looks like you're gonna win this one with a run-a-way vote.
Que sera, sera.
~Dean

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019

Thank you for the great review, Dean. Yeah, I put the 'ed' on there to make it rhyme a little bit more. I don't think it's right but who knows? Lol. I appreciate the stars, friend. Have a great night.

reply by Dean Kuch on 03-Jun-2019

Yep, and you do the same.

Comment from Patty Palmer

Excellent

I love this poem! So true, being here is wonderful but our next home will be heaven, our forever home. I like the picture you chose for your poem too!

 Comment Written 31-May-2019

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reply by the author on 31-May-2019

Thank you for the great review, Patricia. I'm glad you liked the piece.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Author. Good job with the prompt. Your lines/rhymes are well=chosen. Your message is loud and clear, too. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan

 Comment Written 31-May-2019

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reply by the author on 31-May-2019

Thank you for the great review, Jan. I'm glad you liked the piece.