Fifty Shades of Jealousy
So much more than merely green61 total reviews
Comment from Gail Denham
You certainly fulfilled the contest guidelines I like the use of colors to describe the various hues of the relationship. Pity that many marriages do follow this path of mind games.
have to watch out for that.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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You certainly fulfilled the contest guidelines I like the use of colors to describe the various hues of the relationship. Pity that many marriages do follow this path of mind games.
have to watch out for that.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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Big-time pity, indeed. Thank you for your excellent review.
Comment from Raul1
This poem reminds me of one of those INXS music videos where the words written in blank cards are shown then the next blank card with the word appears and so on. I like your poem and there is no mistakes. This is good.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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This poem reminds me of one of those INXS music videos where the words written in blank cards are shown then the next blank card with the word appears and so on. I like your poem and there is no mistakes. This is good.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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Thanks very much, Raul. I appreciate your feedback.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Liberty Justice
BEAUTIFUL! HOW AWESOME you related the color green to jealousy, and how well you matched your colors in your photo to fit perfectly with your descriptions. So right, jealousy can destroy and cause and split up relationships. You have my thumbs up in contest. Read Review mine also. lolol liberty justice
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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BEAUTIFUL! HOW AWESOME you related the color green to jealousy, and how well you matched your colors in your photo to fit perfectly with your descriptions. So right, jealousy can destroy and cause and split up relationships. You have my thumbs up in contest. Read Review mine also. lolol liberty justice
Comment Written 03-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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Terrific review, Liberty. Thanks very much for your comments.
Comment from Sugarray77
I really like your presentation of a green background and altered colored font. Your verse is perfectly enhanced by the photo too. A very eloquent and vibrant poem.
Melissa
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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I really like your presentation of a green background and altered colored font. Your verse is perfectly enhanced by the photo too. A very eloquent and vibrant poem.
Melissa
Comment Written 03-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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Thank you, Melissa. I appreciate your feedback here.
Comment from Elizabeth Johnson1
To the point! Speaks volumes. And so true! I have dealt with enough of it my life to know you are overwhelmingly correct. I hop you find happiness with someone who does not destroy it with jealousy
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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To the point! Speaks volumes. And so true! I have dealt with enough of it my life to know you are overwhelmingly correct. I hop you find happiness with someone who does not destroy it with jealousy
Comment Written 03-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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Thanks, Elizabeth. I appreciate your wise comments.
Comment from Diana L Crawford
You express the colors of jealousy excellently! I love how you take the results of jealousy through the rainbow of colors ending with the true sadness it creates not only for the receiver, but eventually also for the giver. Very good ideas expressed in this work!
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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You express the colors of jealousy excellently! I love how you take the results of jealousy through the rainbow of colors ending with the true sadness it creates not only for the receiver, but eventually also for the giver. Very good ideas expressed in this work!
Comment Written 03-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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Thank you, Diana. This is a wonderful review, and I appreciate it very much.
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Very welcome! I truly love how you broke this down🥰
Comment from Dean Kuch
I gotta hand it to ya, Mystery Poet.
This is a very unique take on the Green-Eyed Monster known as "Jealously."
But, there's nothing wrong with staying outside the proverbial box to be a little bit different from everyone else. Sometimes, as in contests like these, it can even be a game changer.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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I gotta hand it to ya, Mystery Poet.
This is a very unique take on the Green-Eyed Monster known as "Jealously."
But, there's nothing wrong with staying outside the proverbial box to be a little bit different from everyone else. Sometimes, as in contests like these, it can even be a game changer.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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I consider this the ultimate compliment from the King of Unique. Thank you, Dean.
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You're very welcome, great poem!
~Dean
Comment from QC Poet
Interesting colors are radiated from many emotions that quickly get mixed or lost in our moments of anger or lost control. Thank you for Sharing your Gifts and insight.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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Interesting colors are radiated from many emotions that quickly get mixed or lost in our moments of anger or lost control. Thank you for Sharing your Gifts and insight.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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thanks for the nice review.
Comment from James W. Reynolds
This is a creative examination of jealousy. The poem flows well so that the rhyme scheme enhances the reading experience instead of distracting from it. Also the use of the various colors is effective. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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This is a creative examination of jealousy. The poem flows well so that the rhyme scheme enhances the reading experience instead of distracting from it. Also the use of the various colors is effective. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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Thanks very much for the terrific review, James. I appreciate it.
Comment from judester
This is a great entry. Unique rhyming with aaa bbb cccc d. I also entered this one, but might be carrying your water cup to the finish line haha. Cheers, j
"Excuse me, would you like some more water Sire?" congrats on your win chica, well done.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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This is a great entry. Unique rhyming with aaa bbb cccc d. I also entered this one, but might be carrying your water cup to the finish line haha. Cheers, j
"Excuse me, would you like some more water Sire?" congrats on your win chica, well done.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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Oh, please! Thank you for the very encouraging review. xo
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Cheers, I like, by merely your choice of words, you create this feeling of anger, much like the emotion we feel when actually jealous, j
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Thanks.
