Life of the Party
Being able to get noticed is a life skill36 total reviews
Comment from Carla Trinklein
This had me going. The twist at the end came out of nowhere. This very well could have been about my dog, who nudges everyone's hand for attention, begs shamelessly, and has long silky hair. A well crafted story!
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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This had me going. The twist at the end came out of nowhere. This very well could have been about my dog, who nudges everyone's hand for attention, begs shamelessly, and has long silky hair. A well crafted story!
Comment Written 06-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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Why, I think it DOES sound like your dog, Carla!!
Thanks for the terrific review. I appreciate it. xo
Comment from Debbie Pope
I think that you've got a "wiener" here, Rachelle. You had me going from word one. Your only hint as to what was going on was your "nudge" comment. But that went right over my head because I was absorbed in the story. And it is exactly 50 words. How did you do that? You did not waste one single word.
I'll be shocked if you don't win. this is really perfect.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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I think that you've got a "wiener" here, Rachelle. You had me going from word one. Your only hint as to what was going on was your "nudge" comment. But that went right over my head because I was absorbed in the story. And it is exactly 50 words. How did you do that? You did not waste one single word.
I'll be shocked if you don't win. this is really perfect.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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Ohhh, come onnnn, Debbie; "you've got a wiener here"? You have NO shame. (But you did give me a laugh...)
Glad you were tricked right from the start. Mission accomplished! Thanks for the cute review. xo
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Hope you win.
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I came in third, so I was happy. My friend, Judester, won with her piece entitled "Enough" which was EXCELLENT! She definitely deserved the win. Thank you for your encouragement, though. xo
Comment from judester
Yay we win. This one was clever and funny, you had me until the end. Cause I know models don't eat no cocktail wieners. Bravo you. Cheers, j
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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Yay we win. This one was clever and funny, you had me until the end. Cause I know models don't eat no cocktail wieners. Bravo you. Cheers, j
Comment Written 06-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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HAHAHAHAH!!! You're too smart for the room, Woman! xo
Comment from Richard J
LOLOL!
You really had my imagination primed and going, only to slap it to me with the deserved canine finale.
And, that's what I get.
Love the picture choice, and the sneaky, (albeit, creative) way you set your readers up.
Just the laugh I was needing ... best of luck in the contest! ~ Richard : )
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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LOLOL!
You really had my imagination primed and going, only to slap it to me with the deserved canine finale.
And, that's what I get.
Love the picture choice, and the sneaky, (albeit, creative) way you set your readers up.
Just the laugh I was needing ... best of luck in the contest! ~ Richard : )
Comment Written 06-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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thanks, Richard J
You are sincerely welcome, Rachelle. : )
I thank you, as-well, for sharing.
Comment from Gail Denham
Ha - a great ending to what begins as another "romantic" attraction story. Good job. And good luck in the 50 word story contest. It is hard to write that short, isn't it.?
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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Ha - a great ending to what begins as another "romantic" attraction story. Good job. And good luck in the 50 word story contest. It is hard to write that short, isn't it.?
Comment Written 06-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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It sure is!! But, thankfully, I love a good challenge!
Thanks for your nice review here, Gail. I appreciate it.
Comment from William Ross
Ha ha ha well done on this 50 word piece, Sure gets the mind in certain directions with cocktail wieners. great humor enjoyed this much. great job and good luck. have a great day.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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Ha ha ha well done on this 50 word piece, Sure gets the mind in certain directions with cocktail wieners. great humor enjoyed this much. great job and good luck. have a great day.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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If I led that naughty mind of yours astray, William, please forgive me...
and thank you for the fun review!
Comment from Dean Kuch
Our canine companions and spicy foods do not mix well.
Unless you wanna be cleaning up one big mess after another, you'll keep your doggie away from the spicy stuff.
Heck, cocktail wieners even give me heartburn and indigestion. Combine those with mixed drinks and beer and you have a recipe for disaster!
Best wishes to you in the writing prompt.
~Dean
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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Our canine companions and spicy foods do not mix well.
Unless you wanna be cleaning up one big mess after another, you'll keep your doggie away from the spicy stuff.
Heck, cocktail wieners even give me heartburn and indigestion. Combine those with mixed drinks and beer and you have a recipe for disaster!
Best wishes to you in the writing prompt.
~Dean
Comment Written 06-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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Whoa! This guy in the video definitely looks as if he's had something spicy!! (though hopefully nothing alcoholic like his creative master/videographer!)
Thanks for the fun review!
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My pleasure, Rachelle.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I think the 'you' in this story is a little silky terrier, and certainly no spicy foods for him. Entertaining little 50 word story, and good luck in the contest.
cheers.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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I think the 'you' in this story is a little silky terrier, and certainly no spicy foods for him. Entertaining little 50 word story, and good luck in the contest.
cheers.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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Thanks! I think you nailed it, Pearl. I appreciate this upbeat review.
Comment from LIJ Red
Unless we are talking a twilight zone kinky relationship you have taken your canine associate to a gathering, which makes this an excellent flash with just the right twist at the end...
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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Unless we are talking a twilight zone kinky relationship you have taken your canine associate to a gathering, which makes this an excellent flash with just the right twist at the end...
Comment Written 06-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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You guessed it just right, LlJRed. Thanks.
Comment from Mia Twysted
I get it, or at least I think I do. The first few times I read through it I was lost. I thought it was about a girl, then at the end it just did not make sense.
So I reread it slowly one last time and then, poof, it hit like a bullet from a gun....it's a dog.
That's great, it's funny and it makes you think about things beyond the obvious.
Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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I get it, or at least I think I do. The first few times I read through it I was lost. I thought it was about a girl, then at the end it just did not make sense.
So I reread it slowly one last time and then, poof, it hit like a bullet from a gun....it's a dog.
That's great, it's funny and it makes you think about things beyond the obvious.
Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 05-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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That's the beauty of Dribble Fiction - it leads you down one path of thought and then shocks you with a totally different ending. You always go back and see how you were led astray. They're very fun. You should try it next time they offer a contest for it! : )
