Life of the Party
Being able to get noticed is a life skill36 total reviews
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Aren't you a clever flash fiction writer? Just 50 short words and you have your stinger at the end. Well played, my anonymous friend.
Good luck in the contest,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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Aren't you a clever flash fiction writer? Just 50 short words and you have your stinger at the end. Well played, my anonymous friend.
Good luck in the contest,
Rhonda
Comment Written 05-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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Gotcha, did I?! (Mwah, ha, ha!!)
I'm glad you liked it, and thank you for the well-wishes in the contest. I appreciate them very much.
Comment from Alex Rosel
Ha, ha. A humorous piece of flash fiction that is effective with the twist of its culminating sentence. The image you've chosen to accompany this is diversionary; intentional, I presume, to enhance the power of the twist.
Good luck with the competition :)
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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Ha, ha. A humorous piece of flash fiction that is effective with the twist of its culminating sentence. The image you've chosen to accompany this is diversionary; intentional, I presume, to enhance the power of the twist.
Good luck with the competition :)
Comment Written 05-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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Ohhhh yes! I am THAT level of sneaky!
Thanks for the your terrific review and those well-wishes for the contest. Very much appreciated.
Comment from Rikki66
The hard part trying to praise a story in as many characters as the original story. The story is very good are we speaking of a bitch or a witch.
Rikki
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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The hard part trying to praise a story in as many characters as the original story. The story is very good are we speaking of a bitch or a witch.
Rikki
Comment Written 05-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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You tell me!
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Still don;t know.
Rikki
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I'll give you a hint then: WOOF!!
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Thank you.Rikki
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Wow...amazing story. I thought for sure that people
thought she was a hot lady. Now, I realize she is a
dog. Love the photo. You must have fun together.
flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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Wow...amazing story. I thought for sure that people
thought she was a hot lady. Now, I realize she is a
dog. Love the photo. You must have fun together.
flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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I thought you were going to write "Now, I realize she's a hot dog." hahahah.
Thanks for you nice review.
Comment from Diana L Crawford
This is quite humorous. I believe thats what they call being a "tease" in my day! LoL very creative interpretation of this animal and how they can make even the hardest of men melt! excellent!
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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This is quite humorous. I believe thats what they call being a "tease" in my day! LoL very creative interpretation of this animal and how they can make even the hardest of men melt! excellent!
Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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That's so true, Diana. Men are just suckers for a lovely, attentive female (dog).
Thanks for the terrific review.
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Comment from tfawcus
This is an amusing entry. Just enough eroticism to set the mind off in the wrong direction before you pull your readers back into line. Dogs are so much less complicated than women. Perhaps that's why they have the reputation of being man's best friend. LOL
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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This is an amusing entry. Just enough eroticism to set the mind off in the wrong direction before you pull your readers back into line. Dogs are so much less complicated than women. Perhaps that's why they have the reputation of being man's best friend. LOL
Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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I think you are onto something with that, Tfawcus!! Woof!
Comment from karenina
Arf! Maybe MEOW? Whichever one or some other animal friend you got me good with this fifty word little treasure. I love it when a seemingly predictable tale (even a short short one) goes running off dragging my false expectations like a play toy! This one is rich....Best of luck to you!
Wit alone should put you at the top!--Karenina
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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Arf! Maybe MEOW? Whichever one or some other animal friend you got me good with this fifty word little treasure. I love it when a seemingly predictable tale (even a short short one) goes running off dragging my false expectations like a play toy! This one is rich....Best of luck to you!
Wit alone should put you at the top!--Karenina
Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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If I were a bad girl, Karenina, I would say I prefer that top position you mentioned to doggy style. But I'd would never be so politically incorrect as that!!
Anyway, thanks for the adorable review. I absolutely loved it. You brought a smile to my face many times with your cleverly chosen words. xo
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was a really clever fifty-word contest entry. The story is so well done, who would have thought the twist, in the end, was an adoring dog? lol, very good. It's amazing how large a story you can make from 50 words. Well done and good luck. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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That was a really clever fifty-word contest entry. The story is so well done, who would have thought the twist, in the end, was an adoring dog? lol, very good. It's amazing how large a story you can make from 50 words. Well done and good luck. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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I was just reading through the other entries and thinking the exact same thing. Everyone has REALLY stepped up their game here, and it's made for such a fun chunk of reading time this afternoon.
As always, thank you for your warm and gracious review. xo
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Author, (--wink--)
This was just fun. I was - along with everyone else, I'm sure -- fooled into thinking we were talking about a young lady, until the very end. Then I realized we were discussing a four-legged friend. Of course, it could still be a young lady, couldn't it? haha!
Nice job -- good luck! Made me smile!
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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Dear Mystery Author, (--wink--)
This was just fun. I was - along with everyone else, I'm sure -- fooled into thinking we were talking about a young lady, until the very end. Then I realized we were discussing a four-legged friend. Of course, it could still be a young lady, couldn't it? haha!
Nice job -- good luck! Made me smile!
Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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Thanks, Robyn. I appreciate this adorable review. xo
Comment from doggymad1
I loved this short and amusing write. I had visions of some healthy gorgeous teenagers at a rave. Instead you gave us this adorable creature.
I wish you every success in the contest with this fun offering
hugs
Freda
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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I loved this short and amusing write. I had visions of some healthy gorgeous teenagers at a rave. Instead you gave us this adorable creature.
I wish you every success in the contest with this fun offering
hugs
Freda
Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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Hahaha. Thank you, Freda! I love your imagined vision. xo
