Summer Rains
A sonnet34 total reviews
Comment from Cindy Warren
I've never done a sonnet. I'm sure it's harder than it looks, especially when you have to use words that don't really work together. You paint a lovely picture of the summer rain. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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I've never done a sonnet. I'm sure it's harder than it looks, especially when you have to use words that don't really work together. You paint a lovely picture of the summer rain. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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Cindy, do not be put off by the challenge of writing a sonnet. Look SONNET up on Google and you will find many variations. I am flattered you enjoyed mine. Thank you for sharing.
Comment from royowen
You've absorbed the contest's given words with consummate ease, and produced a classic sonnet to reveal your considerable expertise in nailing this contest, like a winner. The bnarrstive is brilliant and particilrly easy to read and a pleasure to review, articulate, smooth and well rhymed in ababcdcdefefgg, well done, good job, good luck, blessjngs, Roy
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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You've absorbed the contest's given words with consummate ease, and produced a classic sonnet to reveal your considerable expertise in nailing this contest, like a winner. The bnarrstive is brilliant and particilrly easy to read and a pleasure to review, articulate, smooth and well rhymed in ababcdcdefefgg, well done, good job, good luck, blessjngs, Roy
Comment Written 05-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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Thank you for the great praise and close reading of SUMMER RAINS, Roy. I am especially pleased you like the fact it is easy to read. My intent is that it can be read easily by all ages.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like this and how beautifully and skillfully you've met the challenge and used the words provided. You've definitely described what the rain does during hot summer days. I love the silky smooth delivery of this along with the excellent rhyme and flow. I enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!
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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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I like this and how beautifully and skillfully you've met the challenge and used the words provided. You've definitely described what the rain does during hot summer days. I love the silky smooth delivery of this along with the excellent rhyme and flow. I enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!
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Comment Written 05-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much, Jeffrey, for your kind praise of SUMMER RAINS. I am delighted you enjoyed it so much.
Comment from Raul1
I like how you talk about nature as if it was acting human. It kind of looks like it is human, but it isn't. I like what you did with this poem. You brought nature to life in this write. Thanks for sharing!
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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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I like how you talk about nature as if it was acting human. It kind of looks like it is human, but it isn't. I like what you did with this poem. You brought nature to life in this write. Thanks for sharing!
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Comment Written 05-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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I am delighted you enjoyed my humanizing of nature in my sonnet, Raul. Thank you for sharing.
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You're welcome.
