Rain,Song, Steam, Bellow
Lots of rain.2 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Rain continued, it did not stop, and it splattered a song on the rooftop of your house and a misty like steam formed over the lake, you enjoyed the sound; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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Rain continued, it did not stop, and it splattered a song on the rooftop of your house and a misty like steam formed over the lake, you enjoyed the sound; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 06-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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Thanks for your review and five stars. Much appreciated,
Comment from Pam (respa)
-That is quite an image.
-You have used the
required words well,
and the rhyme is also effective.
-Good use of alliteration
in line two, along with
the personification of the rain.
-You paint a vivid word
picture of the scene.
-You even include an alligator!
-A good conclusion, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
-One small thing-its mate.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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-That is quite an image.
-You have used the
required words well,
and the rhyme is also effective.
-Good use of alliteration
in line two, along with
the personification of the rain.
-You paint a vivid word
picture of the scene.
-You even include an alligator!
-A good conclusion, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
-One small thing-its mate.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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Thanks for catching my mistake and the five stars
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You are quite welcome.
