My Love
My love is changing4 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
I hope you've put this into a frame and bestowed it upon this love of your life. She will smile forever after, I am sure. Such a lovely tribute this is, with an easy-flowing cadence and good rhyming pattern. I hope it does well for you in the contest, but even if it doesn't it's a FABULOUS write. Good luck. xo
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
I hope you've put this into a frame and bestowed it upon this love of your life. She will smile forever after, I am sure. Such a lovely tribute this is, with an easy-flowing cadence and good rhyming pattern. I hope it does well for you in the contest, but even if it doesn't it's a FABULOUS write. Good luck. xo
Comment Written 13-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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I wrote this and many others for her. After sixty years of marital bliss, she passed away. I wrote this in 1982. She would always ask me how a dress looked on her, I would tell her, "Honey, you would look good in a toe sack," She's been gone four years now. Lonely.
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It must be. I'm so sorry. I wish I had more to offer you than that. xo
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You did just fine, thanks.
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xo
Comment from kahpot
What a wonderful and beautiful poem of love over time, excellent presentation (artwork) for this piece, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
What a wonderful and beautiful poem of love over time, excellent presentation (artwork) for this piece, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 11-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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Thank you for your review and five stars, appreciated/
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
This is an excellent poem in verse and meter and it also expresses the timelessness of love. Love doesn't change when the hair color does. The romantic descriptions are very subtle yet beautiful. I like the poem very much. It's very good.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
This is an excellent poem in verse and meter and it also expresses the timelessness of love. Love doesn't change when the hair color does. The romantic descriptions are very subtle yet beautiful. I like the poem very much. It's very good.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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Thank you. My late wife is my inspiration for all my love poems.
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Thank you for sharing these words with us. I was touched by them.
Comment from Earl Corp
I understand the feelings you're expressing in this poem. I feel the same about my wife Anna. Your poem rhymes, makes sense, and it invokes emotions within the reader. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
I understand the feelings you're expressing in this poem. I feel the same about my wife Anna. Your poem rhymes, makes sense, and it invokes emotions within the reader. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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Thank you for the five stars. My late wife it is the inspiration for
all my love poems.