Riviera Romeo
a sonnet17 total reviews
Comment from Willie P. Smith
You followed the contest rules very well and your message and rhyme is clear. I don't see any need for suggestions of change or modification.
Very good contest entry, good luck.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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You followed the contest rules very well and your message and rhyme is clear. I don't see any need for suggestions of change or modification.
Very good contest entry, good luck.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much, Willie, for sharing RIVIERA ROMEO and your kind praise.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Oh! What a lovely love story, with a very well done, descriptive back drop! Plus we have a little history lesson thrown in, too, AND you used all the words you were given with the prompt. I am totally impressed! Good luck in the contest! This is a wonderful entry. xo
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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Oh! What a lovely love story, with a very well done, descriptive back drop! Plus we have a little history lesson thrown in, too, AND you used all the words you were given with the prompt. I am totally impressed! Good luck in the contest! This is a wonderful entry. xo
Comment Written 07-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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Thank you very much, Rachelle, for your marvelous review of RIVIERA ROMEO.
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You get what you give in this life, Mystery Writer! You earned that review! xo
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Such a lovely and almost 'romantic' offering for this contest... even though it is ekphrastic, your words paint a beautiful image of their own!! ;) Be sure to pop back in there and remove the gnome graffiti from your Au-Ns... :) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! :)
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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Such a lovely and almost 'romantic' offering for this contest... even though it is ekphrastic, your words paint a beautiful image of their own!! ;) Be sure to pop back in there and remove the gnome graffiti from your Au-Ns... :) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! :)
Comment Written 07-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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I am delighted I could put you there at the small cafe in the Riviera. I will look at the gnome grafitti. Thank you.
Comment from way2gokevs
A wonderful poem, the say, France inspires poets to write great verses and your poem enhances that reputation.............Lovely, enjoyed the read.
Best of luck in the competition. Cheers, Kev
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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A wonderful poem, the say, France inspires poets to write great verses and your poem enhances that reputation.............Lovely, enjoyed the read.
Best of luck in the competition. Cheers, Kev
Comment Written 07-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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The picture did all the inspiring as I?ve never been to southern France. Many thanks for sharing RIVIERA RONEO.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I'm loving the sentiments in your sonnet here filled with a loving encounter that lasted a lifetime, your sonnet is in meter with some choice end rhymes and your words entertained me as you told your unique story, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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I'm loving the sentiments in your sonnet here filled with a loving encounter that lasted a lifetime, your sonnet is in meter with some choice end rhymes and your words entertained me as you told your unique story, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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Hi Dolly. Thank you for sharing RIVIERA ROMEO. I am delighted it entertained you.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
That's a very nice verse. I also thought your rhyme and verse was very good. I did not feel like I needed to add or subtract a syllable anywhere in the text. The poem was a simple story that had a very happy ending. I am partial to short works that tell good stories. This was one of them. -Robert-
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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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That's a very nice verse. I also thought your rhyme and verse was very good. I did not feel like I needed to add or subtract a syllable anywhere in the text. The poem was a simple story that had a very happy ending. I am partial to short works that tell good stories. This was one of them. -Robert-
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Comment Written 07-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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Many thanks, Robert, for your kind praise of RIVIERA ROMEO.
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
This is very well done and thoughtful. I love the picture used and the picture painted with words. Sounds so lovely. I saw no errors and wish you well in the contest.
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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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This is very well done and thoughtful. I love the picture used and the picture painted with words. Sounds so lovely. I saw no errors and wish you well in the contest.
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Comment Written 07-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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I was so lucky to find this picture which inspired the sonnet. Many thanks for sharing both.
