Thermostats
Cool, man...13 total reviews
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Thermostats", is short, succinct and very much to the point. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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"Thermostats", is short, succinct and very much to the point. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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Thanks, Duchess!
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is a really clever and well thought out way to describe ice cubes. I like the descriptive, clever, and colorful writing used. You've done a fine job with this and I enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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This is a really clever and well thought out way to describe ice cubes. I like the descriptive, clever, and colorful writing used. You've done a fine job with this and I enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 09-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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Thanks, Jeffrey!
Comment from Boogienights
Hahaha, this is so great! I'm a fan of ice myself so i know where you're coming from. Your picture has made me thirsty and longing for some of those frozen friends. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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Hahaha, this is so great! I'm a fan of ice myself so i know where you're coming from. Your picture has made me thirsty and longing for some of those frozen friends. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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Thanks, Boogie!
Comment from Gail Denham
a tribute to ice - just read another poem with that subject. We need our ice - especially in some parts of the country. Here, we're still having freezing at nights - and only 60 today. I think about camping where we have to bring lots of ice to survive. There are no fridges.
Good poem
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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a tribute to ice - just read another poem with that subject. We need our ice - especially in some parts of the country. Here, we're still having freezing at nights - and only 60 today. I think about camping where we have to bring lots of ice to survive. There are no fridges.
Good poem
Comment Written 08-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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Thanks, Gail!
Comment from Patty Palmer
Nice poem! Of course now I'm thirsty now after seeing that cold drink in the picture, except my drink of choice is Pepsi! Anyway your poem was interesting! Keep writing!
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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Nice poem! Of course now I'm thirsty now after seeing that cold drink in the picture, except my drink of choice is Pepsi! Anyway your poem was interesting! Keep writing!
Comment Written 08-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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Thanks, Patricia!
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you're welcome!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A very refreshing image
and nice presentation.
-The format and
syllable count are good.
-The imagery is effective
as you describe the cooling
elements necessary for summer.
-I like the image "frozen friends"
and the beginning and ending words.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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-A very refreshing image
and nice presentation.
-The format and
syllable count are good.
-The imagery is effective
as you describe the cooling
elements necessary for summer.
-I like the image "frozen friends"
and the beginning and ending words.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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Thanks, Pam!
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You are welcome.
Comment from Cindy Warren
That's an interesting view of ice cubes. I've never thought of them that way. Interesting form of poetry, too. I've never heard of it before. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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That's an interesting view of ice cubes. I've never thought of them that way. Interesting form of poetry, too. I've never heard of it before. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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I've been exposed to more types of poetry than I can count since I joined, Cindy. On one hand, schemes such as this can stilt expression, though it takes an altogether different kind of creativity to serve it well. Thanks, it was a fun write!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
This is excellent! This is quite a challenging form, it seems to me, yet you mastered it with panache and aplomb...AND found the picture-perfect artwork to compliment it. I have a hunch you have another front-runner on your hands here!! Good luck to you. xo
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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This is excellent! This is quite a challenging form, it seems to me, yet you mastered it with panache and aplomb...AND found the picture-perfect artwork to compliment it. I have a hunch you have another front-runner on your hands here!! Good luck to you. xo
Comment Written 07-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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Why thank you, Rachelle! A simple but fun one for me.
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Yes, very fun!
Comment from Hitcher
Your poem and accompanying artwork made me thirsty, but I think 9.am( here at present) is a tad early to indulge in the pleasure and joy of those free floating jewels. A Great entry ! Good luck!
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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Your poem and accompanying artwork made me thirsty, but I think 9.am( here at present) is a tad early to indulge in the pleasure and joy of those free floating jewels. A Great entry ! Good luck!
Comment Written 07-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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That's why the Bloody Mary was invented- to make imbibing before noontime acceptable! Thanks, Hitcher.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This little poem made me smile and I loved your description of ice cubes. I liked drinking mates and frozen friends, and free floating jewels, very clever, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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This little poem made me smile and I loved your description of ice cubes. I liked drinking mates and frozen friends, and free floating jewels, very clever, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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Thanks, Dolly!
