Timeless love
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about love that grows stronger and healthier with time. At first we take a chance to say we love someone but it take many years and a long road to proof the love was true.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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A very well-written poem about love that grows stronger and healthier with time. At first we take a chance to say we love someone but it take many years and a long road to proof the love was true.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Bill Pinder
Great poem as a genuine expression of love, but what in the world is that picture? Haven't a clue. I like that line, "with steady hands, true love remains." Have a great day and keep writing!
Bill
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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Great poem as a genuine expression of love, but what in the world is that picture? Haven't a clue. I like that line, "with steady hands, true love remains." Have a great day and keep writing!
Bill
Comment Written 12-Jun-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Frank De layna
The rhyming was perfect and consistent with the content. Reminds me of my life with my beloved wife. It is becoming rare for me to find good works of writing at fanstory. Than you very much for reasuring that there are really honest writers here among us.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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The rhyming was perfect and consistent with the content. Reminds me of my life with my beloved wife. It is becoming rare for me to find good works of writing at fanstory. Than you very much for reasuring that there are really honest writers here among us.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This could be about the love you have for God or for your spouse and we tend to mellow as the years move forward and be comfortable with our loved ones and love grows in our nurtured nests, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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This could be about the love you have for God or for your spouse and we tend to mellow as the years move forward and be comfortable with our loved ones and love grows in our nurtured nests, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Jun-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Y. M. Roger
This is a wonderful offering for this contest as it tells the story of a lover who waited on another through time and now they walk together through to the end (and beyond!). :) :) Well-written with good flow... thank you for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;) ;)
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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This is a wonderful offering for this contest as it tells the story of a lover who waited on another through time and now they walk together through to the end (and beyond!). :) :) Well-written with good flow... thank you for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;) ;)
Comment Written 11-Jun-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Diana L Crawford
This is a beautiful poem! You express the idea of time very well with your creative use of love being timeless. You have good rhythm to this poem and it flows nicely. You describe a relationship that grows deeper over time and is solid because of it! Great job!
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
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This is a beautiful poem! You express the idea of time very well with your creative use of love being timeless. You have good rhythm to this poem and it flows nicely. You describe a relationship that grows deeper over time and is solid because of it! Great job!
Comment Written 11-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
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Thank you very much
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Very welcome and very deserving!
