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A 7-9-7 Obscure Word Entry

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Comment from Y. M. Roger
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CONGRATS on First Place!! ;) Surprising that we don't here more of this in pop culture with crazy songs out there like "I Like Big Butts And I Cannot Lie" - LOL!! ;) Thanx so much for joining in the fun, June -- loved all the OBSCURITY!! ;) ;) Take care! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
    Thank you for reading and sharing your insights! Glad you liked this one.
Comment from DeborahWrite
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Dear Author,
I loved your photograph and poem! It's fun and your obscure word is a fantastic match to your photograph and verses or vice versa! I wish you my best in winning the contest!
My best,
Deborah

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
    Glad you liked this silly one!
reply by DeborahWrite on 16-Jun-2019
    :)
Comment from Rachelle Allen
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This is absolutely hysterical! The word, the meaning, and, of course, that PICTURE are all funny and endearing. This one wins my vote. I hope other voters feel the same. Good luck to you. xo

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
    So glad you enjoyed this silly one. Someone actually thanked me for not using a photo of one of the Kardashians! Lol Never crossed my mind. Dancing hippos are what I had in mind from the start.
reply by Rachelle Allen on 15-Jun-2019
    Hahaha. That's funny, too!

    Remember Walt Disney's 'Fantasia'? The dancing hippos to the Nutcracker?.
Comment from susand3022
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Hahahahaha!!! What a wonderful photo for your poetic offering about callipygous folk! (or callipygous hippos... however you want to go!) A fun word! :)

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
    So glad you enjoyed this silly one. Someone actually thanked me for not using a photo of one of the Kardashians! Lol Never crossed my mind. Dancing hippos are what I had in mind from the start.
Comment from Six-Star Writer
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Thank you for sharing your ass with us. I liked hearing about what you liked about yourself. If more women shared thoughts about their asses, the world would be a better place.

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
    LOL. Not actually biographical...just a fun in honor of Disney's dancing hippos in Fantasia.
reply by Six-Star Writer on 13-Jun-2019
    Oh, sorry. I didn't mean to imply you had a big ass.
Comment from dmt1967
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This poem did make me chuckle and think of disney's Fantasia lol. The pink elephants put me off drink for quite a while lol. I love the hippo's in skirts. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 11-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
    Glad you enhjoyed this light and fun piece. I was picturing Fantasia's dancing hippos as well!
Comment from RodG
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I really enjoyed this obscure word poem, especially the words paired with that marvelous photo. You not only use the appropriate number of syllables per line but end the poem nicely with alliteration.

 Comment Written 11-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
    Glad you enjoyed this light and fun piece. Now we all know a new word!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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He he he, this made me smile and I just loved that word! Not heard it before, but I have not only been educated by this poem but I also laughed, your words hit the spot and I wish you luck with the contest because this is a winner for me, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 11-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
    So glad you enjoyed this light and fun piece!
Comment from tfawcus
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Butt-wiggling ballerinas! What hipp-notic charms these curvaceous dancers display under their skimpy yellow tutus! You've added a new word, Callipygous, to my vocabulary. I thank you from the bottom of my heart.

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
    So glad you enjoyed this light and fun piece!
Comment from Debbie Pope
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What I like best about this post is how you portrayed your obscure word. It's whimsical. I love your ballerina hippopotamuses. You could have used a person like the Kardashians which I would not have particularly enjoyed. You poem is charming and tasteful.
Nice job. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
    So glad you enjoyed this light and fun piece!