Bejeweled
An Etheree Entry10 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Wow, is this ever beautiful! Mystery Poet, you have mastered this format with style and panache. I love the flow of these words -- beautifully artistic and full of color, exactly the artwork you chose! I haven't read all the entries yet, but so far, this one is a stand-out!! Good luck in the contest. Whether this wins or not, it is still an AWESOME piece! xo
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
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Wow, is this ever beautiful! Mystery Poet, you have mastered this format with style and panache. I love the flow of these words -- beautifully artistic and full of color, exactly the artwork you chose! I haven't read all the entries yet, but so far, this one is a stand-out!! Good luck in the contest. Whether this wins or not, it is still an AWESOME piece! xo
Comment Written 19-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
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Thank you for sharing your insightful and encouraging feedback!
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Always my pleasure, Miss Talent. xo
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
Each and every word is strong, descriptive and beautiful.
Your chosen artwork enhances the poem, for it clearly portrays a hummingbird. Your color scheme complements the artwork.
I love that your last line of the Etheree contains the title of the poem.
Well done and a GREAT contest entry.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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Each and every word is strong, descriptive and beautiful.
Your chosen artwork enhances the poem, for it clearly portrays a hummingbird. Your color scheme complements the artwork.
I love that your last line of the Etheree contains the title of the poem.
Well done and a GREAT contest entry.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much for dropping by to read and review!
Comment from Mia Twysted
Hummingbird is the picture that forms in my head with this piece. Bird are very beautiful and do brighten things up.
However, I feel there should be a faster pace just because of how fast they are when their wings move.
Good luck.
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Hummingbird is the picture that forms in my head with this piece. Bird are very beautiful and do brighten things up.
However, I feel there should be a faster pace just because of how fast they are when their wings move.
Good luck.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2019
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Etheree about the birds in our gardens coming to drink the nectar from our flowers and bring us joy with their beauty and flair with their wings fluttering.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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A very well-written Etheree about the birds in our gardens coming to drink the nectar from our flowers and bring us joy with their beauty and flair with their wings fluttering.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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Thank you for your encouraging comments!
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Great entry. Meets all the rules. The poem is a collection of words that most of us have found swirling in our minds as we watch a hummingbird. The delightful creatures are a collection of jewels and a sight to behold as they shimmer in place. Good luck.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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Great entry. Meets all the rules. The poem is a collection of words that most of us have found swirling in our minds as we watch a hummingbird. The delightful creatures are a collection of jewels and a sight to behold as they shimmer in place. Good luck.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much for dropping by to read and share your insights!
Comment from Brenda Henderson
Very nice. I found this cheerful and uplifting. The picture is beautiful as well. This is well written with a touch of whimsy. I found it quite lyrical as well. Good job. Keep up the good work!
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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Very nice. I found this cheerful and uplifting. The picture is beautiful as well. This is well written with a touch of whimsy. I found it quite lyrical as well. Good job. Keep up the good work!
Comment Written 18-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much for dropping by to read and share your insights!
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You're Welcome!
Comment from Dr. Nad
Bejeweled Beauties is a delight to read. Your creativity continues to shine through, not only in the kaleidoscope of words that you use but also in the
arrangement of the words and letters. Nicely done. You have a finely honed craft of taking the simple and breaking it down so that mere mortals can see the complexity of what we have been considering to be mundane.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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Bejeweled Beauties is a delight to read. Your creativity continues to shine through, not only in the kaleidoscope of words that you use but also in the
arrangement of the words and letters. Nicely done. You have a finely honed craft of taking the simple and breaking it down so that mere mortals can see the complexity of what we have been considering to be mundane.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much for dropping by to read and share your insights!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Such a wonderful etheree to the beautiful and ethereal-like hummingbird! Your well-constructed poem truly brings out the bright, shimmery feathers of these little wonders! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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Such a wonderful etheree to the beautiful and ethereal-like hummingbird! Your well-constructed poem truly brings out the bright, shimmery feathers of these little wonders! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 18-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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So glad you enjoyed this piece on the lovely little hummingbird!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-I love the artwork
and the presentation
is very nice.
-The syllable count and
imagery are very good.
-You paint a very good word picture.
-It is a pleasure to read and
imagine these birds
"swirling and twirling" as
they "sip the sweet nectar."
-I also like the inclusion
of the gem stones.
-The concluding line is
a perfect one for the poem.
-A very good entry; good luck!
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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-I love the artwork
and the presentation
is very nice.
-The syllable count and
imagery are very good.
-You paint a very good word picture.
-It is a pleasure to read and
imagine these birds
"swirling and twirling" as
they "sip the sweet nectar."
-I also like the inclusion
of the gem stones.
-The concluding line is
a perfect one for the poem.
-A very good entry; good luck!
Comment Written 17-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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So glad you enjoyed this piece. Thank you for the positive feedback!
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You are very welcome. It was a good poem.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written Etheree poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and lovely imagery from the art work you chose. blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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This is a very well written Etheree poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and lovely imagery from the art work you chose. blessings, Teri
Comment Written 17-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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So glad you enjoyed this piece. Thank you for the positive feedback!
