Sinless vs Sinner
Jesus loves us, the Devil hates us.6 total reviews
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Hello there, my friend. This is a fantastic Diamante entry. Well chosen adjectives and antonym/synonym. This sounds like a winner. Good luck!
~Kerry
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Hello there, my friend. This is a fantastic Diamante entry. Well chosen adjectives and antonym/synonym. This sounds like a winner. Good luck!
~Kerry
Comment Written 19-Jun-2019
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
I bet Satan is pretty ticked off about this excellent contest entry, but the truth is the truth.
You chose excellent words to describe both Jesus and the devil. The accompanying artwork was perfect for your antonym Diamante. You nailed the form.
This is a great contest entry!
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
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I bet Satan is pretty ticked off about this excellent contest entry, but the truth is the truth.
You chose excellent words to describe both Jesus and the devil. The accompanying artwork was perfect for your antonym Diamante. You nailed the form.
This is a great contest entry!
Comment Written 19-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
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Thank you for the enthused review.
I did try to get the most out of the adjectives, verbs and nous.
I tried to draw a picture in the readers minds and make them feel the beauty of Jesus and the slyness of the devil .
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You did good!!
Comment from rhonnie69
CIAO POET: This posting should win the contest...in that it expresses universal truth. It has infinite divine character. This message has 360 degrees. It is a circle. It has no beginning...it has no end. I love the way your negative here accentuates the positive. It puts our Savior, Jesus, in his proper perspective. Well done, poet. And by the way....you are by no means a pessimist. God bless and keep you, poet. CIAO, my friend. Cordially: rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
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CIAO POET: This posting should win the contest...in that it expresses universal truth. It has infinite divine character. This message has 360 degrees. It is a circle. It has no beginning...it has no end. I love the way your negative here accentuates the positive. It puts our Savior, Jesus, in his proper perspective. Well done, poet. And by the way....you are by no means a pessimist. God bless and keep you, poet. CIAO, my friend. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
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Thank you for the enthusiasm.
Glad you liked the theme ..
..first I had God vs The Devil but then I realised that there is no opposite to God for He is above all.
So I made the correction and put Jesus who is the opposite to the Devil ..
Thank for the highest vote.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks the nature of appreciation of our Lord Jesus loves us and the evil, bloodthirsty Devil does not; well said, well done. Write-Inspire-Change --DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
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This speaks the nature of appreciation of our Lord Jesus loves us and the evil, bloodthirsty Devil does not; well said, well done. Write-Inspire-Change --DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 18-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
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Thanks for the positive review.
Initially , I had written two possible entries ..this one and one on fires ( controlled and uncontrolled) but in the end I think I made the right choice and posted the religion based one.
Comment from Mistydawn
What an interesting poem, the way you described, compared the two. The way you stayed within the guidelines isn't an easy feat. Great job with the writing prompt.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
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What an interesting poem, the way you described, compared the two. The way you stayed within the guidelines isn't an easy feat. Great job with the writing prompt.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
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I had written one on fires ( fireplace /controlled and wildfire/uncontrolled ) but in the end I posted this one .
Thank you for the positive review!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A beautiful diamante of contrast between the perfect son and the fallen angel of temptation.... well done! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest!! ;) ;)
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
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A beautiful diamante of contrast between the perfect son and the fallen angel of temptation.... well done! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest!! ;) ;)
Comment Written 18-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
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Glad you like my entry .. I had ready written one on two different types of fires ( fireplace /controlled and wildfire /uncontrolled) when I thought about this one on regilion.
Thank you for taking the time to review it!