If I Could
Even the most well-intentioned actions have consequences.12 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks if there is a well-planed intention there is consequence, man cannot change history and its consequence, so it is wise to act for future and get its consequence; well said, well done. Write-Inspire-Change --DR ALCREATOR
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reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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This speaks if there is a well-planed intention there is consequence, man cannot change history and its consequence, so it is wise to act for future and get its consequence; well said, well done. Write-Inspire-Change --DR ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 18-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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Thank you very much for this lovely review. You fully understood my poem.
Comment from Diana L Crawford
There is so much truth in these words you write! Going back in time just might create even worse events and cancel out the many blessings also. Thankfully our Creator is in control and all will be revealed one day! You created an excellent piece for your contest!
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reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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There is so much truth in these words you write! Going back in time just might create even worse events and cancel out the many blessings also. Thankfully our Creator is in control and all will be revealed one day! You created an excellent piece for your contest!
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Comment Written 18-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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Thank you very much for your kind and comforting words.
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My pleasure!
