Our Legacy
All the positives we pass to the next generation56 total reviews
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
The poem is very well put together and delineates a very patriotic and proud of your heritage, aura. Nicely said and oh so true are your statements.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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The poem is very well put together and delineates a very patriotic and proud of your heritage, aura. Nicely said and oh so true are your statements.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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Thank you, Raffaelina; I appreciate this very nice review. xo
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Our Legacy, presented in split stanzas with an ABCB rhyme scheme, reminds us that what makes America great is more than what we do wrong.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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This poem, Our Legacy, presented in split stanzas with an ABCB rhyme scheme, reminds us that what makes America great is more than what we do wrong.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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Thank you for completely getting it, Bill. I love this review. xo
Comment from Liberty Justice
SIX STARS 6******How beautiful and patriotic your poem as it reunites country inspiring us to work together and the US so clever. So Awesome. Read Review mine also.lolol libelrty justice
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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SIX STARS 6******How beautiful and patriotic your poem as it reunites country inspiring us to work together and the US so clever. So Awesome. Read Review mine also.lolol libelrty justice
Comment Written 22-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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Thank you VERY much for this resounding, encouraging, and uplifting review. I couldn't appreciate it more. xo
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So smart about the us in USA.Read
Review mine also.lolol liberty justice
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your contest entry, Rachelle. Your lines flow smoothly with a great message to all. I like the way you rhymed the last word of the couplet with the last word of the succeeding one. Your picture choice is super, too. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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You did a great job with your contest entry, Rachelle. Your lines flow smoothly with a great message to all. I like the way you rhymed the last word of the couplet with the last word of the succeeding one. Your picture choice is super, too. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 22-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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Thank you very much, Jan. This was such a specifically helpful review. It's always nice to know what 'connected' with a reader. xo
Comment from Larry5000
This is a very good poem that speaks of the United States and Liberty I thoroughly enjoyed reading this I think there needs to be more poems that deal with this topic.
I am I have a few poems that deals with this subject one nation under God the Second Amendment We the People and the White House be care to check them out thank you for your sharing your very beautiful poem.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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This is a very good poem that speaks of the United States and Liberty I thoroughly enjoyed reading this I think there needs to be more poems that deal with this topic.
I am I have a few poems that deals with this subject one nation under God the Second Amendment We the People and the White House be care to check them out thank you for your sharing your very beautiful poem.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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Sure! I'll gladly check them out, Larry5000. Thanks for the referral.
Thanks, too, for all the encouragement and kind words that comprised this review. I appreciate it very much. xo
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Thanks so much.
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
Rachelle, dear lady, I truly wish I had more sixes. Please accept my virtual six.
- I started off appreciating your poem description and title;
- such a perfect choice of artwork;
- I love your red, white and blue color scheme;
- I love how you described the precious freedoms that exist within our country and your focus on the positives that exist here. Too many people often take for granted how blessed we all are to live in the USA.
- one of the best parts? (believe me, it is ALL exceptional); I love your expression of 'togetherness', 'home of the free because of the brave, united helping hands';
- your last stanza was exceptional!
I wish you the very best in the contest ... this presentation is truly deserving.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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Rachelle, dear lady, I truly wish I had more sixes. Please accept my virtual six.
- I started off appreciating your poem description and title;
- such a perfect choice of artwork;
- I love your red, white and blue color scheme;
- I love how you described the precious freedoms that exist within our country and your focus on the positives that exist here. Too many people often take for granted how blessed we all are to live in the USA.
- one of the best parts? (believe me, it is ALL exceptional); I love your expression of 'togetherness', 'home of the free because of the brave, united helping hands';
- your last stanza was exceptional!
I wish you the very best in the contest ... this presentation is truly deserving.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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Wow, you sweet-talkin' reviewer! This is better than any six because I get to savor it forever. Thank you for this resounding review, chock full of encouragement. xo
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It was a work of art. Truly.
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xo
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Rachelle!
Perceptively crafted with a patriotic message that speaks through the ages. Despite all of the challenges our country has faced in the past, the present, and will undoubtedly face in the future, I, too, believe in "US."
Happy Independence Day!
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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Hello Rachelle!
Perceptively crafted with a patriotic message that speaks through the ages. Despite all of the challenges our country has faced in the past, the present, and will undoubtedly face in the future, I, too, believe in "US."
Happy Independence Day!
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 22-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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The same to you, Diane. Thank you for this really nice review. xo
Comment from moongirlwriter
Oh my goodness. . .I so appreciate this poem. Nicely tied up in a red, white and blue package. Great artwork too. Best of luck to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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Oh my goodness. . .I so appreciate this poem. Nicely tied up in a red, white and blue package. Great artwork too. Best of luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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Thank you very much, moongirlwriter!! This makes me very happy to read. xo
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:)
Comment from Darlene Franklin
Absolutely favorite line: "home of the free because of the brave." Wonderful. Well done at freshly stating all the reasons we're proud to be Americans.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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Absolutely favorite line: "home of the free because of the brave." Wonderful. Well done at freshly stating all the reasons we're proud to be Americans.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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I really appreciate this, Darlene. Thank you for this nice review. xo
Comment from Sandra Elizabeth Williams
I am not an American but I understand the American dream. The words you have penned, Rachelle, are all the reasons so many people want to become an American citizen and those who are citizens feel proud.
An excellent poem. I wish you best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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I am not an American but I understand the American dream. The words you have penned, Rachelle, are all the reasons so many people want to become an American citizen and those who are citizens feel proud.
An excellent poem. I wish you best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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Thanks, Sandra; I appreciate this very much. Which country are you from?
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Hi Rachelle, I'm from Jamaica.
:-)
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I have families in the US though abdvi visit as well.
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Oh, wow!!! I love this part of FS!! SO cool!
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LoL!
