Dear Lover...
2nd Place in 3 Line Poetry Contest/July 14, 201929 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
Wow, burning down the FanStory house with this passionate poem! The artwork is sizzling, too. A wonderful three line poem and entry for the contest.
Sending you my best today as always, dear Diana.
Sal xo
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Wow, burning down the FanStory house with this passionate poem! The artwork is sizzling, too. A wonderful three line poem and entry for the contest.
Sending you my best today as always, dear Diana.
Sal xo
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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LoL! Thanks Sally! This is my first attempt it?s something shorter than a standard poem! I wasn?t sure if I should?ve noted it as having an adult theme! Haha! So thankful for your awesome opinion! Have an awesome weekend friend!
Comment from The Death
Hi Diana,
It's a well-written poem which captures the feeling of passionate love really well. It's quite sensuous in meaning. Excellent use of S sounds as well. It's in fine format as per the contest rules. Hope it does well in the contest. Good luck!
Regards,
Anupam
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Hi Diana,
It's a well-written poem which captures the feeling of passionate love really well. It's quite sensuous in meaning. Excellent use of S sounds as well. It's in fine format as per the contest rules. Hope it does well in the contest. Good luck!
Regards,
Anupam
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much! Your opinion is highly respected!
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements beautifully with a focus on a loved one and correct line and syllable count. I thought the imagery well executed throughout in support of the overall tone of passion and desire. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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This meets the contest requirements beautifully with a focus on a loved one and correct line and syllable count. I thought the imagery well executed throughout in support of the overall tone of passion and desire. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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No thank you for your awesome comment if you?re taking time to read it! This is my first attempt at such a short poem of this kind. I tried to keep it just this side of needing an adult warning! LoL! xoxo
Comment from Anne B Francis
What an amazing picture it really catches the imagination,
there are some very clery people in this world art is amazing.
Lost in an ocean making love so pure beautiful words
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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What an amazing picture it really catches the imagination,
there are some very clery people in this world art is amazing.
Lost in an ocean making love so pure beautiful words
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Thank you for your kind review and for taking time to read! The hardest part was finding this beautiful piece of art that fit what I wanted to say so perfectly!
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Dear Lover..." is an extremely well-written and quasi-erotic piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. To me, this is a six, but unfortunately I'm not given enough of them. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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"Dear Lover..." is an extremely well-written and quasi-erotic piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. To me, this is a six, but unfortunately I'm not given enough of them. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Thank you Dutchess! Your opinion is highly respected and I?m so glad that you enjoyed it!
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Diana, you're more than welcome. I certainly enjoyed it!
Take care and God bless,
the Duchess :)))
Comment from Karen Luciana
Dear Author,
In such s short poem, you captured the essence of how it feels to be enveloped in passion and romance. It can be overwhelming with amazing emotion. Great job. Keep writing.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Dear Author,
In such s short poem, you captured the essence of how it feels to be enveloped in passion and romance. It can be overwhelming with amazing emotion. Great job. Keep writing.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much! I truly appreciate that you took your time to read and review!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
What a great place to be Diana, I was cocooned here with your passionate words, I wish you luck with the contest, this is a fine presentation, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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What a great place to be Diana, I was cocooned here with your passionate words, I wish you luck with the contest, this is a fine presentation, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Thank you Dolly! I was trying to burn the Fanstory house down without having to put an adult warning! Haha! Appreciate that you enjoyed!
Comment from Earl Corp
I never thought I would read an erotic three line poem, but this one is. The picture you chose to accompany the poem enhances the reading experience.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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I never thought I would read an erotic three line poem, but this one is. The picture you chose to accompany the poem enhances the reading experience.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Thanks for your precious comment! It was quite a challenge to remain on this side of ?leaving it to one?s imagination?! LoL
Comment from LyndaS
Well, Diana, I see we are going to have a lot in common. Ha! This is sweet and you've said quite a bit here in three lines. When was the last time you were lost in an ocean of caresses? (insert heavy sigh here) And your art...WOW! Loved it. This is a solid entry into this contest. Good luck to you. Lynda
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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2019
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Well, Diana, I see we are going to have a lot in common. Ha! This is sweet and you've said quite a bit here in three lines. When was the last time you were lost in an ocean of caresses? (insert heavy sigh here) And your art...WOW! Loved it. This is a solid entry into this contest. Good luck to you. Lynda
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Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2019
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Ok, I'm going to reply now so i can do my nomination thing as I should be replenished by now. I'm loving the new Pic!! Woo Hoo! I'm so happy to have met you!!
