Serenades
Minute poetry8 total reviews
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
Your Minute is exceptional, painting exquisitely beautiful images of the natural rhythm of nature's song.
There was not a wasted word in your poem. Each line was strong in meaning.
I felt so much peace and contentment as I was reading.
Beautiful choice of artwork and font style.
A great contest entry, and I wish you the very best!
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Your Minute is exceptional, painting exquisitely beautiful images of the natural rhythm of nature's song.
There was not a wasted word in your poem. Each line was strong in meaning.
I felt so much peace and contentment as I was reading.
Beautiful choice of artwork and font style.
A great contest entry, and I wish you the very best!
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Thank you very much. You have done a lot to encourage me today!
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Truly ? a beautifully penned Minute.
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a very nice Minute poem. You've set a mood with your words and the image. I particularly like the third stanza. Best of luck in the contest with this fine entry. Marilyn
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
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This is a very nice Minute poem. You've set a mood with your words and the image. I particularly like the third stanza. Best of luck in the contest with this fine entry. Marilyn
Comment Written 09-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
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Thank you Marilyn. Glad you liked it.
All the best,
Melissa
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Wow! This is an ambient and eerie write, painting a picture of harmony with playful winds and ghostly tunes as the moon presides over us, much enjoyed and hugely atmospheric, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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Wow! This is an ambient and eerie write, painting a picture of harmony with playful winds and ghostly tunes as the moon presides over us, much enjoyed and hugely atmospheric, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Brenda Henderson
Very nice minute poem. Well written with good form and flow. The words are lyrical and induce reflection. The artwork is a beautiful compliment to this piece. Expertly executed. Solid effort. Good work!
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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Very nice minute poem. Well written with good form and flow. The words are lyrical and induce reflection. The artwork is a beautiful compliment to this piece. Expertly executed. Solid effort. Good work!
Comment Written 09-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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Thank you.
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You're Welcome!
Comment from Sheridan1
This is brilliant. With your descriptions of sounds you have managed to include great deal of movement and touch as well.This poem winds around the reader, an enchantment. Thank you. I definitely want to see more of your work.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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This is brilliant. With your descriptions of sounds you have managed to include great deal of movement and touch as well.This poem winds around the reader, an enchantment. Thank you. I definitely want to see more of your work.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and
presentation.
-This is a very well
written minute poem.
-Good syllable count and form.
-I like all of the nature imagery,
and your appreciation of it.
-You paint a vivid word picture
of the sounds you hear,
"melody" and "harmony."
-I really like the last verse
about the loons.
-A strong entry; good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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-Nice image and
presentation.
-This is a very well
written minute poem.
-Good syllable count and form.
-I like all of the nature imagery,
and your appreciation of it.
-You paint a vivid word picture
of the sounds you hear,
"melody" and "harmony."
-I really like the last verse
about the loons.
-A strong entry; good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 08-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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Thank you.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, this is just a wonderful Minute offering... your masterful employment of this format gives a beautiful mental image of a lake at dawn....and the call of the 'lonely loon' simply is icing on the cake!! ;) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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Oh, this is just a wonderful Minute offering... your masterful employment of this format gives a beautiful mental image of a lake at dawn....and the call of the 'lonely loon' simply is icing on the cake!! ;) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 08-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Elizabeth Johnson1
Beautiful poem! I could place myself in the setting! The desciptive nature gives the reader a great feeling.
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
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Beautiful poem! I could place myself in the setting! The desciptive nature gives the reader a great feeling.
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest
Comment Written 08-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
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Thank you very much!
