Trees
One of God's 3rd day creations4 total reviews
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
An excellent Tetractys contest entry. Your words gave life to those trees. Your poem created a beautiful, stunning image by itself. Your chosen artwork was just a little bit of icing on the cake.
Well done! I wish you the very best in the contest!
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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An excellent Tetractys contest entry. Your words gave life to those trees. Your poem created a beautiful, stunning image by itself. Your chosen artwork was just a little bit of icing on the cake.
Well done! I wish you the very best in the contest!
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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Thank you ever so much! I truly appreciate your review and comments!
Comment from Darlene BoClair
When one takes another look at nature by the appearance of trees it is spiritually motivated. I praise your perfect symbol count. I appreciate your photo. The photo reminds me that not having trees are moments that we miss of creation.
I applaud your desire to enter the writing prompt contest.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
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When one takes another look at nature by the appearance of trees it is spiritually motivated. I praise your perfect symbol count. I appreciate your photo. The photo reminds me that not having trees are moments that we miss of creation.
I applaud your desire to enter the writing prompt contest.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
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I very much appreciate your comments and those six stars! I am truly humbled. Thank you!
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Mystery Writer!
Quick!
Before another moment passes, please review the following line:
to/wards/the/sky = 4 syllables. This line needs to be 3 syllables.
Easy fix: towards sky - as the conjunction "the" really doesn't add to the beauty of your poem.
I hope I have helped.
And, yes, I, too believe trees lift their branches to give "praise to the Creator."
Best Wishes!
Hooray!
Now it works!
diane
diane
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
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Hello Mystery Writer!
Quick!
Before another moment passes, please review the following line:
to/wards/the/sky = 4 syllables. This line needs to be 3 syllables.
Easy fix: towards sky - as the conjunction "the" really doesn't add to the beauty of your poem.
I hope I have helped.
And, yes, I, too believe trees lift their branches to give "praise to the Creator."
Best Wishes!
Hooray!
Now it works!
diane
diane
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
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Thank you ever so much for catching that! I will work to correct that immediately!
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
I feel it takes way more faith to believe in evaluation then in creation. Even Darwin at the end of his life said his theory was a lie. There are so many different kinds of trees and with in the same family like there are something like 400 kinds of just pine tree. There is a divine hand at work. This is very well done and a beautiful picture. Hope you do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
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I feel it takes way more faith to believe in evaluation then in creation. Even Darwin at the end of his life said his theory was a lie. There are so many different kinds of trees and with in the same family like there are something like 400 kinds of just pine tree. There is a divine hand at work. This is very well done and a beautiful picture. Hope you do well in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
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I am very grateful for your reviewing and the comments. Too bad people don't know or remember that about Darwin. Thank you ever so much!
