Comment from Six-Star Writer

Good

I don't know why people keep telling other people to breathe. It's obvious we have to breathe, or we'll die. We are always breathing. And "folding into yourself" doesn't make any sense. We're not pancake batter.

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019

Thank you for the review... even if you did not get it.

reply by Six-Star Writer on 11-Jul-2019

There was nothing to get. The words speak for themselves; that's what you don't realize. The reality is you don't understand what I wrote. My comments are valid and they stand.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

All creatures need to hibernate, take rest, to rejuvenate for living and keep them folded into themselves; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write-Inspire --DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019

Thanks so much!

Comment from Brenda Henderson

Excellent

Excellent! What in the world is that blue creature? I love the curve of the plant. It looks like it's folding over the winged blue creature. Beautifully crafted. The line and syllable count form a perfect Tetractys. This was great fun to read and look at! Good job!

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019

Hi Brenda... thank you for the review. The blue dragonfly does stand out against the green.. I am glad you enjoyed it.