Bikini Battle
A teenager obeys her father.12 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
He he he, I thought something like that was coming up! You made me smile here and we can try and protect our youngsters from the inevitable, but the inevitable always happens! He he he, a fine write, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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He he he, I thought something like that was coming up! You made me smile here and we can try and protect our youngsters from the inevitable, but the inevitable always happens! He he he, a fine write, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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I probably should have put a different picture with the story... it signals it too much.
Thanks for your review.
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I think the picture is perfect!
Comment from Patty Palmer
Oh, this is good! It makes sense that she would tell him that. He told her not to wear the bikini. It's her dad's fault!
Very good and I didn't see anything misspelled or anything.
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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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Oh, this is good! It makes sense that she would tell him that. He told her not to wear the bikini. It's her dad's fault!
Very good and I didn't see anything misspelled or anything.
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Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
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Yeah, let's blame it on the poor long-suffering parent!
