A Rare Day Off
A story of reaction3 total reviews
Comment from Lobber
I got different lessons learned
- on a busy morning toast frozen waffles
- never buy cheap flammable sleepware from China
- on a day off unplug your phone
- - Lobber
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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I got different lessons learned
- on a busy morning toast frozen waffles
- never buy cheap flammable sleepware from China
- on a day off unplug your phone
- - Lobber
Comment Written 15-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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Thank You so much for your kind review.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. I enjoyed reading it. There is good flow to your story, the action is believable, and the consequences apparent. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
I believe Jim's nicknames doctor overtime & the Firefighter need to be capitalized.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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You did a great job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. I enjoyed reading it. There is good flow to your story, the action is believable, and the consequences apparent. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
I believe Jim's nicknames doctor overtime & the Firefighter need to be capitalized.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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Thank You so much for your kind review.
Comment from JLR
A wonderful tale spun, drama with a message for all. You should appreciate, as I do the graphic creator whose image clearly pulls the reader right into the piece. Good successes!
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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A wonderful tale spun, drama with a message for all. You should appreciate, as I do the graphic creator whose image clearly pulls the reader right into the piece. Good successes!
Comment Written 15-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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Thank You so much for your kind review.
