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Zegel Poem without the Letter A

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Comment from Rdfrdmom2
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I really like your Zegel Poem; however, I have to
wonder if the word "and" in the first line would
disqualify you from winning. I think that would
be such a shame for such a beautiful poem.

thanks for sharing
good luck in the contest
jan

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 Comment Written 15-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
    Thanks for catching that! I copied and pasted the rough draft instead of the final one. I?ve corrected it. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
reply by Rdfrdmom2 on 15-Jul-2019
    not a problem