Happy Poem Coming Right Up
Eat Your Fill13 total reviews
Comment from QC Poet
A Nicely Cooked up poem with a helping of heartfelt seasoning. The only ingredient that was overlooked is to review the final recipe before releasing for the taste test. I've seen a few poem recipes getting scrambled with the computer uploading here. Very Fun to Read and as for your Poetic Restraint I rate it a A plus
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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A Nicely Cooked up poem with a helping of heartfelt seasoning. The only ingredient that was overlooked is to review the final recipe before releasing for the taste test. I've seen a few poem recipes getting scrambled with the computer uploading here. Very Fun to Read and as for your Poetic Restraint I rate it a A plus
Comment Written 01-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much, i,m glad you liked it. :)
Comment from jim vecchio
i absolutely loved this, especially that eighth stanza! I realize we need rules, but when you concentrate on rhyme, meter, and syllables too closely, you tend to lose the life of your work! This was a great recipe for a winner!
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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i absolutely loved this, especially that eighth stanza! I realize we need rules, but when you concentrate on rhyme, meter, and syllables too closely, you tend to lose the life of your work! This was a great recipe for a winner!
Comment Written 01-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Thank you, you're very kind. I've never been one to concentrate on meter and syllable count, l just write from the heart. :)
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Same here! But there are some sticklers among the judges!
Comment from Michele Harber
What a wonderful submission for the prompt. Your poem is written charmingly, just like a recipe one would find in their mother's recipe box. I love your list of ingredients, and that you make the harder-to-find ones, like meter, optional. Your poem shows a lovely sense of humor, and I admire your ability to incorporate varying rhyme schemes without its being disruptive (a skill I've never mastered).
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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What a wonderful submission for the prompt. Your poem is written charmingly, just like a recipe one would find in their mother's recipe box. I love your list of ingredients, and that you make the harder-to-find ones, like meter, optional. Your poem shows a lovely sense of humor, and I admire your ability to incorporate varying rhyme schemes without its being disruptive (a skill I've never mastered).
Comment Written 31-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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Thank you for this fantastic review! :)
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It's my pleasure. I really enjoyed this.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is an excellent poem and presentation, for the challenge. Perfect rhyming and use of imagery. I enjoyed reviewing this. The image brought your whole presentation to life. Glad that you shared this, today.
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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This is an excellent poem and presentation, for the challenge. Perfect rhyming and use of imagery. I enjoyed reviewing this. The image brought your whole presentation to life. Glad that you shared this, today.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 31-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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Thanks so much, l really appreciate it. :)
Comment from Darlene Franklin
If you manage to include all of that, you've written an epic. But absolutely, great poetry includes all of that. Something that tugs at our hearts and our tongues and makes us pay attention. Well done and good luck.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2019
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If you manage to include all of that, you've written an epic. But absolutely, great poetry includes all of that. Something that tugs at our hearts and our tongues and makes us pay attention. Well done and good luck.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2019
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Thank you for such a nice review. It's much appreciated. :)
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, this is just a delightful collection of quatrains that fully engages the reader and sparks an interest in simply picking up that pencil and trying!! ; ) ;) Great job! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls today! ;)
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2019
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Oh, this is just a delightful collection of quatrains that fully engages the reader and sparks an interest in simply picking up that pencil and trying!! ; ) ;) Great job! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls today! ;)
Comment Written 18-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2019
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Thank you so much. Its great hearing from you.
Comment from Joy Graham
Hello Mystery Poet,
I enjoyed your recipe for writing a poem today :) It sounds like you included the best ingredients, and I love your bouncy meter.
One thing I noticed:
- "It goes down easier (then) the rest" - than
Best wishes in this contest. I think this is a top contender in my humble opinion.
Joy xx
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2019
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Hello Mystery Poet,
I enjoyed your recipe for writing a poem today :) It sounds like you included the best ingredients, and I love your bouncy meter.
One thing I noticed:
- "It goes down easier (then) the rest" - than
Best wishes in this contest. I think this is a top contender in my humble opinion.
Joy xx
Comment Written 18-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2019
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Thank you for this very nice review, I always appreciate hearing from my fellow writers. Thank you also for pointing out my error...I've already corrected it. Thanks again. :)
Comment from royowen
This is an excellent celebratory poem, with great language to drive the theme, and very upwardly mobile message to compliment. Written in no fixed ,eter, but with abcb rhyming to keep reader motivated, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
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This is an excellent celebratory poem, with great language to drive the theme, and very upwardly mobile message to compliment. Written in no fixed ,eter, but with abcb rhyming to keep reader motivated, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 17-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
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Thank you for such a nice review, it's really appreciated. :)
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This poem a good state of recipe for making a poem, with good suggestion for preparation and cooking instructions for a poem and ingredients have been suggested an interesting dish of sweet poem; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write-Inspire --DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
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This poem a good state of recipe for making a poem, with good suggestion for preparation and cooking instructions for a poem and ingredients have been suggested an interesting dish of sweet poem; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write-Inspire --DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 17-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
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Thank you for reviewing. It's always nice to hear your opinion. :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poetry recipe. Poems consist of words and we are the cheffs to make the soup tasty and acceptable to the ones who like to drink our every word that completes the soup.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
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A very well-written poetry recipe. Poems consist of words and we are the cheffs to make the soup tasty and acceptable to the ones who like to drink our every word that completes the soup.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2019
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Thank you for this great review, it means so much to me. :)
