Crissy
Long lost friend11 total reviews
Comment from Larry5000
Great job again on writing about something that was very close to you. Sometimes those are the easiest to write about. The fact that you had a picture of her to go along with the poem was great.
Once again I might have changed a word, taken out or added a word for a little bit better line flow in places, but that is just me. Great job.
Larry
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2019
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Great job again on writing about something that was very close to you. Sometimes those are the easiest to write about. The fact that you had a picture of her to go along with the poem was great.
Once again I might have changed a word, taken out or added a word for a little bit better line flow in places, but that is just me. Great job.
Larry
Comment Written 27-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2019
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Thank you for such a nice review. I still have crissy. Thanks again. :)
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You are very welcome
Comment from rockmann
Very nice. Everyone has something from their past that is special to them (mine, don't laugh, was a yo-yo) and when it goes away or is lost, it feels like the world is crumbling.
The ending was wonderfully written. Criss 2 has so much meaning to you.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2019
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Very nice. Everyone has something from their past that is special to them (mine, don't laugh, was a yo-yo) and when it goes away or is lost, it feels like the world is crumbling.
The ending was wonderfully written. Criss 2 has so much meaning to you.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2019
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Thank you for this very nice review, i really appreciate it.
Comment from Neonewman
Yes, Ebay. I have both found and sold items from my childhood. This is a great little entry for this object writing prompt. Best of luck to you and Crissy in the votes.
God bless
Steve
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2019
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Yes, Ebay. I have both found and sold items from my childhood. This is a great little entry for this object writing prompt. Best of luck to you and Crissy in the votes.
God bless
Steve
Comment Written 22-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2019
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Thank you for reviewing, I really appreciate it.
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My pleasure.
Comment from AprilViolet
I absolutely adore this poem! I too had a doll I loved as a child. Her name was Baby Giggles. I will never forget the joy of opening her on Christmas morning. Thank you for bringing back those memories for me. Love your poem! So well written!
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2019
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I absolutely adore this poem! I too had a doll I loved as a child. Her name was Baby Giggles. I will never forget the joy of opening her on Christmas morning. Thank you for bringing back those memories for me. Love your poem! So well written!
Comment Written 21-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2019
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Thank you for those wonderful shining stars.
Comment from Joan E.
What a fascinating photograph--one can see why Crissy is so close to your heart! How extraordinary that the doll had hair that could grow and that you have a red-haired daughter who found a replacement on eBay. I very much enjoyed your rhythmic, rhymed couplets as well. Brava! Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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What a fascinating photograph--one can see why Crissy is so close to your heart! How extraordinary that the doll had hair that could grow and that you have a red-haired daughter who found a replacement on eBay. I very much enjoyed your rhythmic, rhymed couplets as well. Brava! Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 20-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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Thank you this wonderful review. I love my doll. .but my living doll is ny most precious gift. Thanks again for reading.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about an object that is important to you since your childhood when you lost your precious doll. You told your children about your sadness and theyou got you a perfect replica after many years.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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A very well-written poem about an object that is important to you since your childhood when you lost your precious doll. You told your children about your sadness and theyou got you a perfect replica after many years.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my poem. I really appreciate it.
Comment from Darlene Franklin
Oh, what a lovely childhood memory - with such vivid detail - but best of all is the gift-giver, your own red-haired doll. Oh, how sweet. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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Oh, what a lovely childhood memory - with such vivid detail - but best of all is the gift-giver, your own red-haired doll. Oh, how sweet. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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Thank you for such a nice review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I have never heard of this Doll, I only know Barbie, it must have only been sold in America? But this little doll must have won your heart and your memory is fond and warm here, a sweet remembrance, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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I have never heard of this Doll, I only know Barbie, it must have only been sold in America? But this little doll must have won your heart and your memory is fond and warm here, a sweet remembrance, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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I have just fixed it. I accidentally changed the background color when I went to edit some words. Its showing up right now for me. Is it still dark for you?
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Thank you so much for such a nice review.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A very nice image
and presentation.
-A well written poem
about this doll that you loved.
-Effective rhyme, imagery,
and the poem flows very well.
-Excellent description of her
in the first verse.
-You show how sad you were
about losing her in verse two.
-A very good verse with
the extra special Christmas present.
-The concluding verses are
very good, too, as you describe
getting things on e-Bay and
your lovely daughter.
-This is very worthy of
a sixth star and a
win in the contest!
-Good luck!
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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-A very nice image
and presentation.
-A well written poem
about this doll that you loved.
-Effective rhyme, imagery,
and the poem flows very well.
-Excellent description of her
in the first verse.
-You show how sad you were
about losing her in verse two.
-A very good verse with
the extra special Christmas present.
-The concluding verses are
very good, too, as you describe
getting things on e-Bay and
your lovely daughter.
-This is very worthy of
a sixth star and a
win in the contest!
-Good luck!
Comment Written 20-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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Thank you so much for your kind review. : ) I have fixed the background color. I didn't even know it looked like that. I must have accidentally changed the colors when I went to edit some words. Lol. Thank you for reading
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You are very welcome. The poem looks great! I guess I missed a couple of verses. I revised your review for you. I would have given you 6 stars if
they had been available!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a super job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. Your verse are smooth flowing to tell this story. Your descriptive wording lets readers feel as if they are right there hearing you retell this story. What an ending, too. Your daughter is amazing to have taken it upon herself to locate another Crissy for you that you will treasure and think of her each time you see the doll. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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You did a super job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. Your verse are smooth flowing to tell this story. Your descriptive wording lets readers feel as if they are right there hearing you retell this story. What an ending, too. Your daughter is amazing to have taken it upon herself to locate another Crissy for you that you will treasure and think of her each time you see the doll. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
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Thank you for reading. I do have the best daughter in the world , who always looks after me. #very lucky.
