Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

This is a lovely poem, my friend. I am glad it has a happy ending and that their lives are blessed by having married. I enjoyed this one much~Debbie

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019

Thank you for the review and compliments.
Blessings to you for your time to read and review it.

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

This is a good rhyming poem and uses the aabb format very well. The cadence and good rhyme choices lead the reader through very well. I enjoyed reading this verse.

Melissa

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2019

Thank you for Your valuable time to read and review this poem offering. God's Blessings to you.

Comment from Mia Twysted

Excellent

An interesting little piece. It was fun to read and very smooth. I enjoyed the way one line just fell into another so easily.

I was very delighted.

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2019

Thank you for your time to read and review this poem offering. Blessings to you.