Mirror, Mirror
On the wall7 total reviews
Comment from poetwatch
I like it. :) It's like cracking a joke. You see the funny part come apart, but speaking truthfully Author. A mirror only mirrors the reflection it sees. :) Wish you hadn't sold it. Yet, I think my sister-in-law bought one with a crack. I wonder...? This is a good entry for the Mirror Contest.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
  |
I like it. :) It's like cracking a joke. You see the funny part come apart, but speaking truthfully Author. A mirror only mirrors the reflection it sees. :) Wish you hadn't sold it. Yet, I think my sister-in-law bought one with a crack. I wonder...? This is a good entry for the Mirror Contest.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
-
Thank you for taking time to read and review my poem...i really appreciate it. :)
Comment from rockmann
Dumb mirror! I would suggest breaking up the copy with more spacing as each line seems to run together. Other than that, it is well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
|
Dumb mirror! I would suggest breaking up the copy with more spacing as each line seems to run together. Other than that, it is well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
-
Thank you for reading and for this nice review.
Comment from kahpot
Wonderful, the mirror sees all, even the next step (hammer) very well written and great artwork, I like the flow and rhyme in this poem, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
|
Wonderful, the mirror sees all, even the next step (hammer) very well written and great artwork, I like the flow and rhyme in this poem, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 31-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
-
Thank you for this great review. I really appreciate your kind words. :)
Comment from RodG
You are having lots of fun here spoofing the classic story while also doing a marvelous job of characterizing the Narrator and personifying the mirror. Good use of dialog to build the suspense.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
|
You are having lots of fun here spoofing the classic story while also doing a marvelous job of characterizing the Narrator and personifying the mirror. Good use of dialog to build the suspense.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
-
Thank you so much, it's so kind of you.
-
My pleasure. Rod
Comment from AprilViolet
What a funny poem! I absolutely LOVE it!! That will teach that mirror for messing with its owner! Six stars and good luck in your contest! This is definitely a winner!
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2019
 |
What a funny poem! I absolutely LOVE it!! That will teach that mirror for messing with its owner! Six stars and good luck in your contest! This is definitely a winner!
Comment Written 31-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2019
-
Thank you for the lovely stars. :)
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This is a real fun, funny, humorous and interesting poem, an Evil Queen the mirror tells the truth, frankly in a zigzag manner; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write-Inspire --DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2019
|
This is a real fun, funny, humorous and interesting poem, an Evil Queen the mirror tells the truth, frankly in a zigzag manner; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write-Inspire --DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2019
-
Thank you so much...that means a lot.
Comment from Earl Corp
This is definitely the best Mirror Contest poem I've read, you have my vote. Your poem rhymed, makes sense, and it made me laugh. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2019
|
This is definitely the best Mirror Contest poem I've read, you have my vote. Your poem rhymed, makes sense, and it made me laugh. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2019
-
Thank you for making my day, and for the generous 6 stars. It means a lot coming from a writer I admire. :)
