Speed Thrills But Accuracy Kills
Sometimes Being Last is a good thing59 total reviews
Comment from MamaBebop
Loved it, Earl!
Could see the tumbleweeds rolling by the saloon and my heart was pounding in my chest for high noon.
I am awe inspired by poetry writers.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Loved it, Earl!
Could see the tumbleweeds rolling by the saloon and my heart was pounding in my chest for high noon.
I am awe inspired by poetry writers.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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I'm not really a poetry writer, but thank you. How did you know who wrote this? Did I sign my name? I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work,
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I asked to be a fan and this work was under your profile. I used your Pen name-shortened.
Comment from Loredana
It doesn't matter if the meter is off, your poem is really entertaining. It's like reliving a movie of Sergio Leone with the music of Ennio Morricone in the background. The Good, the Bad, and the Ugly.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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It doesn't matter if the meter is off, your poem is really entertaining. It's like reliving a movie of Sergio Leone with the music of Ennio Morricone in the background. The Good, the Bad, and the Ugly.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my work.
Comment from Lance S. Loria
A western cowboy poem. A traditional gun fight setting. Good rhyming throughout. Very complimentary photo artwork to enhance the read. I'm still wondering who's still standing.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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A western cowboy poem. A traditional gun fight setting. Good rhyming throughout. Very complimentary photo artwork to enhance the read. I'm still wondering who's still standing.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Maybe I'll reveal who's still standing in my next poem. Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my work.
Comment from susand3022
Hello Author, sometimes it's the quick ones that come out the best though. ;) You never know what's going to happen when the pen hits the page right? Not bad for 20 minutes and cowboys. :) :)
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Hello Author, sometimes it's the quick ones that come out the best though. ;) You never know what's going to happen when the pen hits the page right? Not bad for 20 minutes and cowboys. :) :)
Comment Written 02-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my work.
Comment from Diana L Crawford
This is really good! I felt like I was a saloon girl peaking out the door watching a real shoot out take place! Great use of descriptive words to create the wild west image in a short poem.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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This is really good! I felt like I was a saloon girl peaking out the door watching a real shoot out take place! Great use of descriptive words to create the wild west image in a short poem.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my work.
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My pleasure!
Comment from Amale Rhodes
I'm sitting at the edge wondering who was last. Way to build it up and let me down! But, no seriously, a good read, glad you've got me wondering. Thank you!
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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I'm sitting at the edge wondering who was last. Way to build it up and let me down! But, no seriously, a good read, glad you've got me wondering. Thank you!
Comment Written 02-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Maybe I'll reveal who's still standing in another poem. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Lulube
Well you had the concept and it just flew from your fingers. So well that i'm not going to put mine into the contest. lol Not sure yet.
great action story with lots of imagery. Terrific rhyming. Good luck in the contest
lulube
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Well you had the concept and it just flew from your fingers. So well that i'm not going to put mine into the contest. lol Not sure yet.
great action story with lots of imagery. Terrific rhyming. Good luck in the contest
lulube
Comment Written 02-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my work.
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welcome
lulube
Comment from Sugarray77
Great poem with a rollicking meter and shoot em up theme. Perfect for the cowboy prompt. I enjoyed reading it and it being built around High Noon.. very clever to draw the reader to an easily recognizable Western movie. Good luck!!
Melissa
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Great poem with a rollicking meter and shoot em up theme. Perfect for the cowboy prompt. I enjoyed reading it and it being built around High Noon.. very clever to draw the reader to an easily recognizable Western movie. Good luck!!
Melissa
Comment Written 02-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my work.
Comment from damommy
Reminds me of the movie, 'High Noon.' I agree - the one that reaches last reaches best. lol
Good entry for this contest. The picture is a perfect choice. Good luck.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Reminds me of the movie, 'High Noon.' I agree - the one that reaches last reaches best. lol
Good entry for this contest. The picture is a perfect choice. Good luck.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Ulla
It's a great poem for the contest and it has the right western feel about it. As I don't know anything about meter, I can't advise there. I'm a prose writer after all. But I liked it. And good luck. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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It's a great poem for the contest and it has the right western feel about it. As I don't know anything about meter, I can't advise there. I'm a prose writer after all. But I liked it. And good luck. Ulla:))
Comment Written 02-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Thank you Ulla for reading and reviewing my work.
