Comment from Lance S. Loria

Excellent

A tremendous "I can" poetry contest entry. A wonderful Christian message for everyone. A tribute of your faith. No edits or adjustments necessary from me

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019

Thank you for the time to read and review this poem offering. God's Blessings to you.

Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

I really like the lyrics of your poem. I am a firm believer of the Almighty. Without Him life would be rather tough. He is one Mighty God and He is everlasting. Thank you for reminding us what He is.....

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019

Thank you for the review and May God Bless you.

Comment from Tpa

Excellent

it flows beautifully as I read through it and the punctuation (or purposeful lack of) keeps me at the rhythm that I know the author intended for me. I also pay particular attention to the presentation of it. Since there are usually fewer letters and words than a story or article, I place great importance on the spacing, placement and actual choice of letters and words. Presentation is everything to me with a 5.0.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019

Thank you for the review and compliments on this contest offering. Blessings to you for your time to read and review.