Unbroken Faith
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Comment from kahpot
This is an exceptional read and description of how the individual sees and uses their muse and what it is that inspires them, "You lifted me up" "and dropped me under" Faith is a wonderful thing, this is a very well presented and written work, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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This is an exceptional read and description of how the individual sees and uses their muse and what it is that inspires them, "You lifted me up" "and dropped me under" Faith is a wonderful thing, this is a very well presented and written work, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 05-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much for your words
Comment from rspoet
Hello Iza,
Faith can be a powerful force that extends beyond
one's own self and lifts up when all else is pulling down.
Excellent meaningful poem and entry for the muse contest
Well done
Good luck in the voting
Robert
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2019
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Hello Iza,
Faith can be a powerful force that extends beyond
one's own self and lifts up when all else is pulling down.
Excellent meaningful poem and entry for the muse contest
Well done
Good luck in the voting
Robert
Comment Written 05-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much for the kind words
Comment from Darkhorse555
she holds the chains that bind, no vessel is truly broken when it sails into your crowning words very beautifully painted piece faith holds love dear
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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she holds the chains that bind, no vessel is truly broken when it sails into your crowning words very beautifully painted piece faith holds love dear
Comment Written 04-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much for your kind words
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your ultra-concise poem movingly and vividly expresses how faith can
get someone through the brutality and disappointments of life. I gave a 4 because line 1 is missing one or more words that would make it coherent.
Either that or "through" should be "threw."
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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Your ultra-concise poem movingly and vividly expresses how faith can
get someone through the brutality and disappointments of life. I gave a 4 because line 1 is missing one or more words that would make it coherent.
Either that or "through" should be "threw."
Comment Written 04-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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Thank you for your kind words
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your ultra-concise poem movingly and vividly expresses how faith can
get someone through the brutality and disappointments of life. I gave a 4 because line 1 is missing one or more words that would make it coherent.
Either that or "through" should be "threw."
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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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Your ultra-concise poem movingly and vividly expresses how faith can
get someone through the brutality and disappointments of life. I gave a 4 because line 1 is missing one or more words that would make it coherent.
Either that or "through" should be "threw."
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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Thank you
Comment from Sally Law
Me, too. What would we do without the Lord? I am sure I don't know. He is everything to me and the keeper of my heart and faith.
Sending you my best today as always, and my best for the contest,
Sally xo
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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Me, too. What would we do without the Lord? I am sure I don't know. He is everything to me and the keeper of my heart and faith.
Sending you my best today as always, and my best for the contest,
Sally xo
Comment Written 04-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much for your kind words and if I am still alive today is because of our Lord
Comment from Peter Nwaobi
From being a broken vessel to possessing an "unbroken faith"... that's powerful. I enjoyed the poem... the flow was seamless. Well done.
In my humble view, i feel the word "through" in the first line should be "threw".... except I'm understanding it differently.
Nonetheless, twas a well written poem!
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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From being a broken vessel to possessing an "unbroken faith"... that's powerful. I enjoyed the poem... the flow was seamless. Well done.
In my humble view, i feel the word "through" in the first line should be "threw".... except I'm understanding it differently.
Nonetheless, twas a well written poem!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much for your kind review and for taking a chance on this poem
Comment from Susan Larson
I just floated through this poem. You speak so fluently to your muse. I'm wondering, did you mean "through" in your first line or did you mean "threw?" I love your last line about unbroken faith. Very well done.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2019
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I just floated through this poem. You speak so fluently to your muse. I'm wondering, did you mean "through" in your first line or did you mean "threw?" I love your last line about unbroken faith. Very well done.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much for your kind review.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about having an unbroken falth in your Muse that are always ready to inspire the mind to create masterpieces in art, poetry or writing.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2019
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A very well-written poem about having an unbroken falth in your Muse that are always ready to inspire the mind to create masterpieces in art, poetry or writing.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2019
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Thank you
Comment from tfawcus
This one starts with a bit of a mixed metaphor, punching the broken vessel, but the meaning is clear. A poem that shows intense emotion and engenders empathy in the reader. One typo: confess(e).
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2019
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This one starts with a bit of a mixed metaphor, punching the broken vessel, but the meaning is clear. A poem that shows intense emotion and engenders empathy in the reader. One typo: confess(e).
Comment Written 03-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2019
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Thanks for pointing out the typo and for your kind review
