The French Letter
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Comment from lyenochka
Ah, she's a snow leopard now. Poor Charles had better be on guard. I remember Charles put that painting in the bank but didn't they promise it to the son of the subject of the painting?
" partly a sympton of delayed shock " (symptom) unless this was done for accented speech.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Ah, she's a snow leopard now. Poor Charles had better be on guard. I remember Charles put that painting in the bank but didn't they promise it to the son of the subject of the painting?
" partly a sympton of delayed shock " (symptom) unless this was done for accented speech.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Yes, they promised to sell the painting on behalf of Alain, the subject's great grandson. They may find it difficult to fulfil that promise now. We shall see.
Thanks for picking up the spelling mistake - now corrected.
Comment from rspoet
Hello Tony,
Another very fine chapter for your book.
I thought Gaston might cause a problem in regard to the painting. Of course, he has overlooked one vital element. As far as the world knows, HE IS DEAD and he cannot blow his cover or risk assassination. Now how can a dead man claim the painting? :)
Parsons appears quite competent and slipped the "foreseeable" word in nicely. If anything goes wrong, it simply wasn't foreseeable and something always goes wrong.
Love the comment about 'freckles.' I agree.
Charles may need the slyness of a snow leopard before this whole thing is over.
Well done.
Maybe one of these days we'll get to Pakistan :)
Robert
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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Hello Tony,
Another very fine chapter for your book.
I thought Gaston might cause a problem in regard to the painting. Of course, he has overlooked one vital element. As far as the world knows, HE IS DEAD and he cannot blow his cover or risk assassination. Now how can a dead man claim the painting? :)
Parsons appears quite competent and slipped the "foreseeable" word in nicely. If anything goes wrong, it simply wasn't foreseeable and something always goes wrong.
Love the comment about 'freckles.' I agree.
Charles may need the slyness of a snow leopard before this whole thing is over.
Well done.
Maybe one of these days we'll get to Pakistan :)
Robert
Comment Written 06-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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Thanks for your comments on this chapter, Robert. Yes, it?s beginning to look as though they?ll be on their way to Pakistan soon. All the best, Tony.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-This is a very good chapter, Tony, that
really shows the character of Gaston.
-I didn't expect him to be so nasty to Charles,
and Helen even bristled at his accusations.
-I wonder if that foreshadows his suspicions
that Charles knows the truth about him.
-The "To brie, or not to brie" is very clever!
-I liked it because we could take a minute
to smile, especially after the beginning.
-The description is well done as details
of their trip are finalized.
-The imagery in the last
paragraph is very poetic:
"snow leopards roam wild and free."
-I enjoyed this chapter.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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-This is a very good chapter, Tony, that
really shows the character of Gaston.
-I didn't expect him to be so nasty to Charles,
and Helen even bristled at his accusations.
-I wonder if that foreshadows his suspicions
that Charles knows the truth about him.
-The "To brie, or not to brie" is very clever!
-I liked it because we could take a minute
to smile, especially after the beginning.
-The description is well done as details
of their trip are finalized.
-The imagery in the last
paragraph is very poetic:
"snow leopards roam wild and free."
-I enjoyed this chapter.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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Thanks, Pam. I appreciate the sixth star and positive comments. Glad you enjoyed the mix between humour and action. All the best, Tony.
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You are very welcome and deserving, Tony. I appreciate your reply.
Comment from Willie P. Smith
Excellent paragraph. Interesting and understandable. Only one possible correction: Paragraph fourteen, (I think), line three. "Poring over maps."
Should that be, "Pouring over books?". Very good work.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Excellent paragraph. Interesting and understandable. Only one possible correction: Paragraph fourteen, (I think), line three. "Poring over maps."
Should that be, "Pouring over books?". Very good work.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Many thanks for your review, Willie, and for your suggestion. I did actually mean ?poring over maps? as in:
pore2
/pɔː/
verb
gerund or present participle: poring
be absorbed in reading or studying (something).
"I spent hours poring over cookery books"
synonyms: study, read intently, peruse, be absorbed in, scrutinize, scan, examine, go over/through
"they pored over a map?
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Good dialogue through tis chapter Tony, a touch of humour, information on the next stop and a little promise for a great last night in Paris before heading off.
A good reminder, for me, about the painting Charles took, I'd forgotten that. Good writing,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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Good dialogue through tis chapter Tony, a touch of humour, information on the next stop and a little promise for a great last night in Paris before heading off.
A good reminder, for me, about the painting Charles took, I'd forgotten that. Good writing,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 06-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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Thanks, Valda. Glad you enjoyed the humour and connections with previous chapters. All the best, Tony.
Comment from JudyE
I am very disappointed!! lol I didn't pick up anything to comment on. How am I going to come up with 150 characters if you don't slip up from time to time? Seriously, I think it is great writing. Best wishes. Judy
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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I am very disappointed!! lol I didn't pick up anything to comment on. How am I going to come up with 150 characters if you don't slip up from time to time? Seriously, I think it is great writing. Best wishes. Judy
Comment Written 05-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Thanks for looking, Judy. A second pair of eyes is absolutely invaluable I appreciate your kind comments and the sixth star. All the best, Tony.
Comment from w.j.debi
I am so sorry I have not been around for the past year and so I am catching this story for the first time in the middle. This chapter is captivating. Your internal dialogue is excellent and gives us a glimpse of what the main character is thinking while adding another dimension to the dialogue between him and the other characters. Excellent descriptions as well. You certainly add a sizzle with that last paragraph. Looks like Charlie is in for an interesting evening.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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I am so sorry I have not been around for the past year and so I am catching this story for the first time in the middle. This chapter is captivating. Your internal dialogue is excellent and gives us a glimpse of what the main character is thinking while adding another dimension to the dialogue between him and the other characters. Excellent descriptions as well. You certainly add a sizzle with that last paragraph. Looks like Charlie is in for an interesting evening.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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So good to hear from you, WJ. I appreciate your kind words and comments about the dialogue - the sixth star, as well!
All the best, Tony.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Excellent! This story promotes a rational thought that love, compassion and help would really act miracles in every world; good characterization, solid and realistic dialogues are contributory; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Keep Writing, Inspiring, Changing
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
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Excellent! This story promotes a rational thought that love, compassion and help would really act miracles in every world; good characterization, solid and realistic dialogues are contributory; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Keep Writing, Inspiring, Changing
Comment Written 04-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
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Thank you for your review. Much appreciated. Best wishes to you.
Comment from BeasPeas
Another well written chapter of your book, Tony. Clear and interesting. Well defined characters. Good dialog. The last night in Paris plans sound heavenly. Marilyn
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
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Another well written chapter of your book, Tony. Clear and interesting. Well defined characters. Good dialog. The last night in Paris plans sound heavenly. Marilyn
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
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Thanks, Marilyn. I appreciate your comments about the clarity, interest and characterisation. All the best, Tony
Comment from Mistydawn
I get to follow up with story yeah. This is another well-written interesting chapter. A great follow up from your previous one. A romantic riverboat cruise could make for an exciting night. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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I get to follow up with story yeah. This is another well-written interesting chapter. A great follow up from your previous one. A romantic riverboat cruise could make for an exciting night. Nicely done.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Once again, I'm encouraged by your comments. Thank you! Best wishes, Tony
