Senryu (Hideaway)
Everyone Needs their own....8 total reviews
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
I'm laughing at this one because it's been the topic of many of my conversations lately (occasionally with others, but very much between me and myself). I want a she-shed.
Your poem was entertaining and timely, in that the she-sheds are becoming very popular. Great chosen artwork. Enjoyed your author notes.
Such a grand contest entry. Very, very best wishes!
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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I'm laughing at this one because it's been the topic of many of my conversations lately (occasionally with others, but very much between me and myself). I want a she-shed.
Your poem was entertaining and timely, in that the she-sheds are becoming very popular. Great chosen artwork. Enjoyed your author notes.
Such a grand contest entry. Very, very best wishes!
Comment Written 05-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Thank you Gale!!
Comment from BeasPeas
Oh, what a pretty "she shed." Your senryu is well written. A good entry for the contest. A good place to spend quality time writing. I have a girlfriend who has one. I'll have to ask her how much time she spends in it. Marilyn
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Oh, what a pretty "she shed." Your senryu is well written. A good entry for the contest. A good place to spend quality time writing. I have a girlfriend who has one. I'll have to ask her how much time she spends in it. Marilyn
Comment Written 05-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Thanks so much!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
He he he, I love it! It is usual for women to be in their kitchens! But to have your own 'she shed' is a wonderful alternative, I wish I had one too, good luck with the contest, I enjoyed this one, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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He he he, I love it! It is usual for women to be in their kitchens! But to have your own 'she shed' is a wonderful alternative, I wish I had one too, good luck with the contest, I enjoyed this one, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Thanks so much, Dolly.
Comment from Patty Palmer
LOL when I saw the picture come up the first thing I thought of was Sheryl's She Shed, the commercial! I like your poem and the picture is just the best you could have picked!
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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LOL when I saw the picture come up the first thing I thought of was Sheryl's She Shed, the commercial! I like your poem and the picture is just the best you could have picked!
Comment Written 05-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Thanks so much, Patty.
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You're welcome!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written Senyru you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. I could see relaxing in that to get away! Blessings Teri
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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This is a very well written Senyru you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. I could see relaxing in that to get away! Blessings Teri
Comment Written 04-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Thanks so much, Teri.
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
This made me truly laugh with abandon. What a lovely little gem you have created here! I wish I had a six. This piece is one of my favorites I've read.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
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This made me truly laugh with abandon. What a lovely little gem you have created here! I wish I had a six. This piece is one of my favorites I've read.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
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Thank you! So glad you like it.
Comment from RodG
The first time I heard the phrase "She Shed" was on that insurance ad where hers burns down. Nice to know this Speaker has her own getaway place. Rod
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
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The first time I heard the phrase "She Shed" was on that insurance ad where hers burns down. Nice to know this Speaker has her own getaway place. Rod
Comment Written 04-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
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Haha.. thanks Rod. Wish I truly had a She Shed... I would write there all of the time.. I appreciate the review!
Comment from rama devi
A SHE SHED! Great idea. Great pic. Fine senryu. CRAWLS is such a fun satirical verb choice in this context. Made me chuckle. There is a missing space in your title. Otherwise, no nits. Good luck!
Warmly,
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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
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A SHE SHED! Great idea. Great pic. Fine senryu. CRAWLS is such a fun satirical verb choice in this context. Made me chuckle. There is a missing space in your title. Otherwise, no nits. Good luck!
Warmly,
rd
Comment Written 04-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
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Thank you very much Rama... I will go and edit the title... Hugs.
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Welcome! Hugs! :)
