Senryu (dreadful foggy eve)
Senryu contest entry20 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
I like the little poems. They are hard. To say so much with so little.I wouldn't want to see that on a dark night. Good writing Scary picture. One left to review until I read everyone else, and then begin again. Karen
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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I like the little poems. They are hard. To say so much with so little.I wouldn't want to see that on a dark night. Good writing Scary picture. One left to review until I read everyone else, and then begin again. Karen
Comment Written 12-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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Lol! No, I wouldn't either. I love the challenge the short pieces offer.
Thank you again for all the reviews.
God bless,
Steve
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:-)
Comment from Susan Larson
This is funny, but in my case it was never the in-laws. It was my own mother. In fact, I didn't even invite her to my 50 birthday party because I didn't want her embarrassing me in front of my friends.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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This is funny, but in my case it was never the in-laws. It was my own mother. In fact, I didn't even invite her to my 50 birthday party because I didn't want her embarrassing me in front of my friends.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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Awe! Sorry to hear that. Thank you for another great review.
God bless
Steve
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Well, actually, my husband had the in-law problem ; )
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LOL! Right.
Comment from Joan E.
I regret the delay in responding, but the Baltic cruise ship had an unstable internet signal. Just got back home and have lots of catching up to do.
You selected the perfect picture and I did not expect the conclusion. Best wishes in the senryu contest- Joan
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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I regret the delay in responding, but the Baltic cruise ship had an unstable internet signal. Just got back home and have lots of catching up to do.
You selected the perfect picture and I did not expect the conclusion. Best wishes in the senryu contest- Joan
Comment Written 15-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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No worries, thank you for the awesome review.
God bless
Steve
Comment from kiwigirl2821
A great little write and congrats on the second place win. My father in law wasn't bad but oh that mama! She was tiny but, oh so direct and powerful. I love the Senryu format and think you did a marvelous job! xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
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A great little write and congrats on the second place win. My father in law wasn't bad but oh that mama! She was tiny but, oh so direct and powerful. I love the Senryu format and think you did a marvelous job! xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 12-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
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Thank you. Mine was a real beast lol.
Comment from BeasPeas
Oh, this is SO humorous. I'm sure many will identify with your senryu. The image combined with the words is great. Best of luck in the contest with this fine entry. Marilyn
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Oh, this is SO humorous. I'm sure many will identify with your senryu. The image combined with the words is great. Best of luck in the contest with this fine entry. Marilyn
Comment Written 08-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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LOL! Thank you for the awesome review.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
Senryu (dreadful foggy eve), is short, succinct and very much much to the point. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it is. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Senryu (dreadful foggy eve), is short, succinct and very much much to the point. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it is. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Thank you for the awesome review, my friend.
God bless
Steve
Comment from Nike23
I like this poem. Your poem adheres to the rules of a Senryu poem. Your poem is very funny. I don't have in-laws but I hope when I do they won't summon terror. Good choice of words. Good Job.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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I like this poem. Your poem adheres to the rules of a Senryu poem. Your poem is very funny. I don't have in-laws but I hope when I do they won't summon terror. Good choice of words. Good Job.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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LOL! Thank you for the awesome review.
God bless
Steve
Comment from Gail Denham
Oh my - I do hope the mom/law doesn't present that kind of picture to you. As I'm a mother/law four times over, I do not wish to be dreaded. However, your poem is funny and I like it.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Oh my - I do hope the mom/law doesn't present that kind of picture to you. As I'm a mother/law four times over, I do not wish to be dreaded. However, your poem is funny and I like it.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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I'm sure you are a great one, mine was not.
God bless
Steve
Comment from A. Willow Bends
Wish I had a six! Hilarious. This is phenomenal. I love the sense of humor conveyed in this short little piece. You condensed this so well. I laughed out loud! Great photo choice. Good luck!
Wendy
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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Wish I had a six! Hilarious. This is phenomenal. I love the sense of humor conveyed in this short little piece. You condensed this so well. I laughed out loud! Great photo choice. Good luck!
Wendy
Comment Written 07-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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Thank you for the awesome review, I had a lot of fun with it.
God bless
Steve
Comment from M Milles
This is hilarious! The photo is creepy. I hope the in-laws, aren't. Nicely written Senryu. I found no grammatical errors. Good luck writing again and with the in-laws;)
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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This is hilarious! The photo is creepy. I hope the in-laws, aren't. Nicely written Senryu. I found no grammatical errors. Good luck writing again and with the in-laws;)
Comment Written 07-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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I had fun with this one, the pic was a perk.
God bless
Steve