Winds of change
A Trimeric22 total reviews
Comment from misscookie
I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem, the way the colors help the wind blow across the
bridge to a path of a new life
they all fit together making a perfect math, the words tell it all so true
yes, you captured my attention from the first line to the last.
Thank you for sharing
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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2019
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I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem, the way the colors help the wind blow across the
bridge to a path of a new life
they all fit together making a perfect math, the words tell it all so true
yes, you captured my attention from the first line to the last.
Thank you for sharing
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Comment Written 17-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2019
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Thank you very much
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Your very welcome.
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An unusual form and not read any of these before. The repeated line gave me a sense of shifting change and how stubborn some are to changes, but resisting is futile as it happens anyway, finding firmer ground is the goal here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2019
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An unusual form and not read any of these before. The repeated line gave me a sense of shifting change and how stubborn some are to changes, but resisting is futile as it happens anyway, finding firmer ground is the goal here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Gloria ....
Excellent poem and superb presentation. Your use of literary devices, metaphor and alliteration work well in drawing the theme to an uplifting conclusion.
Best of luck to you in the booths. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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Excellent poem and superb presentation. Your use of literary devices, metaphor and alliteration work well in drawing the theme to an uplifting conclusion.
Best of luck to you in the booths. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 16-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Mystery Writer. The poem meets the criteria of a Trimeric poem. Winds of change are now more of a typhoon of change in our post modern society. Robert
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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Hello Mystery Writer. The poem meets the criteria of a Trimeric poem. Winds of change are now more of a typhoon of change in our post modern society. Robert
Comment Written 16-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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Thank you very much
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You're welcome!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and
presentation.
-A good job with
the form and rhyme.
-I like the first verse
with "winds of change
and "dust'n doubt."
-You effectively go from
that to the conclusion:
"to find our love's clearest route."
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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-Nice image and
presentation.
-A good job with
the form and rhyme.
-I like the first verse
with "winds of change
and "dust'n doubt."
-You effectively go from
that to the conclusion:
"to find our love's clearest route."
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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Thank you very much
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You are welcome.
Comment from Bill Schott
This trimeric poem, Winds of Change, has the proper formatting and finds that the sweeping upheaval of change need not affect two people's love, which can endure all things. Nice.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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This trimeric poem, Winds of Change, has the proper formatting and finds that the sweeping upheaval of change need not affect two people's love, which can endure all things. Nice.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Patty Palmer
your poem runs fluidly when read aloud. The rhyme and rhythm are present which gives a bounciness to the poem. Following down the path together to finding the most beautiful!
Patty
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2019
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your poem runs fluidly when read aloud. The rhyme and rhythm are present which gives a bounciness to the poem. Following down the path together to finding the most beautiful!
Patty
Comment Written 09-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your trimeric is well-written and thought-provoking. Changes can range
from joyous to terrifying, and there are so man levels in-between! I like the last stanza the best because it takes us beyond the confusion to clarity.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Your trimeric is well-written and thought-provoking. Changes can range
from joyous to terrifying, and there are so man levels in-between! I like the last stanza the best because it takes us beyond the confusion to clarity.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Thank you very much, and thank you for noticing that I tried to clear the doubt
Comment from Sally Law
Love the beat elf this poem and sweet sentiments within. It sounds like married love of which I can appreciate. It has filled my life and lead me upward for a long time.
Sending you my best today and for the upcoming contest,
Sally :+)
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Love the beat elf this poem and sweet sentiments within. It sounds like married love of which I can appreciate. It has filled my life and lead me upward for a long time.
Sending you my best today and for the upcoming contest,
Sally :+)
Comment Written 08-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Thank you very much, and yes love is a wonderful thing
Comment from the13thpoet
A happy Thursday to you. thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the contest. I enjoyed the flow and rhyme of it. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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A happy Thursday to you. thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the contest. I enjoyed the flow and rhyme of it. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Thank you for your great review
