Winds of change
A Trimeric22 total reviews
Comment from judester
This is a great entry for a difficult prompt I thought. It flows and gives us a little lesson on life's' fickle winds. Dust and doubt is very apt for those moments we all encounter at some point in our journey, cheers, j
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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This is a great entry for a difficult prompt I thought. It flows and gives us a little lesson on life's' fickle winds. Dust and doubt is very apt for those moments we all encounter at some point in our journey, cheers, j
Comment Written 08-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Wow! Thank you very much for your wonderful review
Comment from Nike23
I like your poem. Your word choice is excellent. Your word choice is descriptive and vivid. Your words create images in the reader's minds. There are a bunch of good lines. My favorite line is actually the first stanza. This stanza pulls the reader in. Your picture aligns nicely as well. Good Job
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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I like your poem. Your word choice is excellent. Your word choice is descriptive and vivid. Your words create images in the reader's minds. There are a bunch of good lines. My favorite line is actually the first stanza. This stanza pulls the reader in. Your picture aligns nicely as well. Good Job
Comment Written 07-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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Thank you, for this very wonderful review
Comment from Gail Denham
I like the term "dust'n doubt" - that is how it is for many heading to the alter. You wonder if you've made the right decision - whether you wish to spend your life with this person. I think I was numb cuz I don't remember debating very much. But we're married 60 years, thanks be to God.
Good poem for this challenge.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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I like the term "dust'n doubt" - that is how it is for many heading to the alter. You wonder if you've made the right decision - whether you wish to spend your life with this person. I think I was numb cuz I don't remember debating very much. But we're married 60 years, thanks be to God.
Good poem for this challenge.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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Thank you very much, yes it can get a bit cloudy down that aisle
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Life is about change. Your story meets all of the contest criteria. This is very good. It makes a great contest submission and should do very well in the voting booth. Contests on FanStory are difficult to win, but you may do it.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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Life is about change. Your story meets all of the contest criteria. This is very good. It makes a great contest submission and should do very well in the voting booth. Contests on FanStory are difficult to win, but you may do it.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Trimeric treat poem about the winds that frequently change and leave us confused and not knowing what to expect next.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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A very well-written Trimeric treat poem about the winds that frequently change and leave us confused and not knowing what to expect next.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Janetsue
This is an excellent trimeric giving the reader much to think about and relate to. A well-paired couple can combine their plans to better handle problems and negative surprises together.
Just one suggestion:
to find our loves (love's) clearest route
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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This is an excellent trimeric giving the reader much to think about and relate to. A well-paired couple can combine their plans to better handle problems and negative surprises together.
Just one suggestion:
to find our loves (love's) clearest route
Comment Written 07-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Diana L Crawford
This is beautifully written! very touching and your use of each of the lines in the first verse is excellent! the sentiment of love being the path to clearing our hearts and mind is exceptional concept! Good luck in your contest! xo
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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This is beautifully written! very touching and your use of each of the lines in the first verse is excellent! the sentiment of love being the path to clearing our hearts and mind is exceptional concept! Good luck in your contest! xo
Comment Written 07-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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Thank you very much
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my pleasure to read!
Comment from pome lover
well, if this is a personal account, it sounds like you two are brave and will get through tough things together. That is certainly the test of true love.
I think you expressed it beautifully and with feeling, and I wish you luck in the contest and in life.
Best wishes.
pome lover
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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well, if this is a personal account, it sounds like you two are brave and will get through tough things together. That is certainly the test of true love.
I think you expressed it beautifully and with feeling, and I wish you luck in the contest and in life.
Best wishes.
pome lover
Comment Written 07-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
What cool picture. I found this very well done. I saw no errors and though I don't know a lot about Trimeric poetry, I liked this and it is really colorful and I really like that. Hope you do well in the contest. Rox
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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What cool picture. I found this very well done. I saw no errors and though I don't know a lot about Trimeric poetry, I liked this and it is really colorful and I really like that. Hope you do well in the contest. Rox
Comment Written 07-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This is fun to read. It reminds me of a folk song with the "dust n' doubt' going on. I like how the winds of change divert people's thoughts. It is certainly a fact of life! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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This is fun to read. It reminds me of a folk song with the "dust n' doubt' going on. I like how the winds of change divert people's thoughts. It is certainly a fact of life! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 07-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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Thank you very much
