I Surrender To Your Paw Play
Troubadour Tom comes calling.12 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Well, when I saw Roy's mention of your Troubadour Tom poem, I found I already reviewed that one. But that one was rated G and this one, at least PG-13 or R! Lol. Enjoyed how you play with words and their sounds.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2022
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Well, when I saw Roy's mention of your Troubadour Tom poem, I found I already reviewed that one. But that one was rated G and this one, at least PG-13 or R! Lol. Enjoyed how you play with words and their sounds.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2022
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Goodness, how did you chance upon that naughty one from a couple of years ago? What has Roy been saying about Troubadour Tom? - and where?
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Go read his post from today about his troubadour days. It was the nonet he referred to - not this one! 😂
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How did you find this old one? Is there a search engine somewhere to put in key words such as troubadour tom?
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Oh, that's easy. Just click on the Magnifier to search your entire Portfolio. Then do the Windows Search (Ctrl-F) and I searched for 'troubadour'
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Thank you so much for teaching me that new trick. I was sure I didn't have Windows as I have an Apple Mac, but this is a relatively new computer and your instructions worked just fine. That naughty poem about my first incarnation of Troubador Tom is definitely not for children!
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😂 Still witty as always. Glad I could help with the Windows search.
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Much appreciated.
Comment from Ogden
A randy feline, huh? The writer's alter ego? I was sensing that other side of you, Lisa.
Have you ever noticed how much insight we get when we read the work of the others on this site?
That's a most interesting read!
:))
Don
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2019
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A randy feline, huh? The writer's alter ego? I was sensing that other side of you, Lisa.
Have you ever noticed how much insight we get when we read the work of the others on this site?
That's a most interesting read!
:))
Don
Comment Written 09-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2019
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... insight perhaps, or maybe barking up the wrong tree? A writer's art is to have an imagination. I wrote a very good poem about a crystal meth addict without ever being addicted to anything myself.
But yes, I do feel kittenish at times... although I have never had a shag in a shed!! Still, I'm not dead yet - never say never.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"I Surrender To Your Paw Play", is an exceptionally well-written and delightfully entertaining piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented work To me, this is a seven, But I've never been given one of them! I look forward to seeing your next post
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2019
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"I Surrender To Your Paw Play", is an exceptionally well-written and delightfully entertaining piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented work To me, this is a seven, But I've never been given one of them! I look forward to seeing your next post
Comment Written 09-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2019
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Haha... I love the idea of a 7! Thanks so much for your delightful review.
Comment from Sanku
ha that is true . they are lucky or are they '
I liked your poem very much .the feline and the human foreplay get mixed up in the words and that is quite interesting.all the best for the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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ha that is true . they are lucky or are they '
I liked your poem very much .the feline and the human foreplay get mixed up in the words and that is quite interesting.all the best for the contest.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Thanks for your review, Sanku. That Troubadour Tom has parallels in the human world.
Comment from kahpot
Ah! Yes, lucky buggers, ( I remember when) , and yes your gorgeous photo does look a wee bit to young, this is an excellent poem and read it flows very smoothly and tells a quite humorous story, very well done, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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Ah! Yes, lucky buggers, ( I remember when) , and yes your gorgeous photo does look a wee bit to young, this is an excellent poem and read it flows very smoothly and tells a quite humorous story, very well done, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 07-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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Thanks for reviewing! Kittens grow up so fast these days... about as quickly as we are aging at the other end... but they are having more fun while doing it!
Comment from BOO ghost
How darling,,,
BOO is a kitty lover.
My favorite quatrain: Meow... meow! Stroke me now!
(no, not there, it's tender.)
I promise not to look at you -
go on, do what you have to do.
Yes, I surrender!
Really loved it!
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BOO Ghost
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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How darling,,,
BOO is a kitty lover.
My favorite quatrain: Meow... meow! Stroke me now!
(no, not there, it's tender.)
I promise not to look at you -
go on, do what you have to do.
Yes, I surrender!
Really loved it!
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BOO Ghost
Comment Written 07-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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Hello Boo, boo to you too!
I'm glad you enjoyed my poem, thanks for reviewing it.
Comment from Earl Corp
I also look back thinking if only i knew then what i know now.interesting entry into the contest using a cat's point of view. Your poem rhymed, makes sense, and entertained me. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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I also look back thinking if only i knew then what i know now.interesting entry into the contest using a cat's point of view. Your poem rhymed, makes sense, and entertained me. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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I'm pleased you like this one, Earl. It's interesting to think how much our lives might be, or might not be, different if we knew then what we know now.
Comment from JLR
What a delightful and very loving poetic presentation. Your words are quite profound and honest. Thank you for sharing, good luck in the booth and write on and write often.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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What a delightful and very loving poetic presentation. Your words are quite profound and honest. Thank you for sharing, good luck in the booth and write on and write often.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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Thanks for your review!
Comment from Elynn Icart
The love and personal that we witness in the gesture of a pets paw was captured in Your poem. They really can show nurturing love or feisty playfulness, as well as simple gentleness. I appreciate how you captured that.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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The love and personal that we witness in the gesture of a pets paw was captured in Your poem. They really can show nurturing love or feisty playfulness, as well as simple gentleness. I appreciate how you captured that.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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Thanks for your review Elynn. My cat and I spend a lot of time together and she has multiple personalities she entertains me with. I hope she finds me entertaining as well! She must do, or else she'd be off away someplace else.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
The kitty looks like he has utterly surrendered LOL. This meets the requirements in a clever manner - hope it works for you. The rhyme and meter are well executed throughout. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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The kitty looks like he has utterly surrendered LOL. This meets the requirements in a clever manner - hope it works for you. The rhyme and meter are well executed throughout. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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That is one laid-back kitty all right! Love comes in all shapes and forms. Although maybe cats don't fall in love with anything but their supper dish or a catnip mouse.
