I Surrender To Your Paw Play
Troubadour Tom comes calling.12 total reviews
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I love the line: My dandy, randy feline, you really are without par!
Before I bought parakeets, an article about them called them "randy birds." And some of them certainly are! This is clever, and it also is actually pretty tame in the way of the warning you put on it. The other line I thought, oh ha, that's what my brother's cats are thinking was: Meow... meow! Stroke me now! Well-communicated poem.
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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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I love the line: My dandy, randy feline, you really are without par!
Before I bought parakeets, an article about them called them "randy birds." And some of them certainly are! This is clever, and it also is actually pretty tame in the way of the warning you put on it. The other line I thought, oh ha, that's what my brother's cats are thinking was: Meow... meow! Stroke me now! Well-communicated poem.
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Comment Written 07-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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That is interesting about the parakeets. I never think about bird sex and now I have a mental image of parakeets being randy!
Thanks for reviewing my poem. I never know what will offend people so I just covered myself so people don't get shocked out of their tiny prudish minds by the mention of 'test tickles' or shag.
Comment from royowen
An excellent free verse and an entry in this love poetry contest. And you've stepped outside the norm with this cute feline based work. A good work, language rich with some saucy expressions, and articulately scribed. And excellent post, well done. Blessings, Roy
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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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An excellent free verse and an entry in this love poetry contest. And you've stepped outside the norm with this cute feline based work. A good work, language rich with some saucy expressions, and articulately scribed. And excellent post, well done. Blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 07-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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I was wondering whether it might be too saucy, but it's all in good fun. Naughty Tom-cat! Thanks very much for your review, Roy.
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Well done
