Love's Petals Pulled Apart
The emptiness afterwards.12 total reviews
Comment from Iza Deleanu
The love petals pulled apart as Daisy...that depending on the count kills love and pulls friendships apart. Ending in a "drumbeat so complete". Good luck with your writing
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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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The love petals pulled apart as Daisy...that depending on the count kills love and pulls friendships apart. Ending in a "drumbeat so complete". Good luck with your writing
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Comment Written 10-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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Thank you for reviewing and for your good wishes.
Comment from Cindy Warren
That's so sad. It sounds like a love that was doomed from the start. One of them had no intention of staying forever. I could be wrong, but that's my impression. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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That's so sad. It sounds like a love that was doomed from the start. One of them had no intention of staying forever. I could be wrong, but that's my impression. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 10-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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You could be right, Cindy. At the start things always seem wonderful, but we never really know if someone else is operating on a different agenda.
