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Safe and Snug

Ode to Winter 5-7-5

4 total reviews 
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Awe... This is such a sweet little 5-7-5 poem for the ode to Winter contest.
I love bears, so cute. Nicely done and good luck to you! ~Kerry

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2019

Comment from rhonnie69
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

CIAO POET: WOW! If there is one being on this planet that I love and adore. That is a female human being who is, mother-minded. All woman are, NOT, mother-minded. But God bless and keep those of you who are. A lucky man will be blessed to get one of you women. I've got one. Thank you Jesus. My woman is sooo lovable, precious, and sweet. And she's mother-minded. (sigh) I Love Her. God bless you. Ciao poet. Cordially: rhonnie69.

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2019

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Excellent
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This is a good ode to winter, mamma bear gives birth to her cubs, goes on long winter nap, in this safe and snug winter; well said, well done. Keep Writing, Inspiring, Changing

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
    Thank you for the positive review..

    I wanted to present Winter in a different way besides describe its traits.


    I find it amazing that a female bear will get pregnant in June but then her body will put on halt the whole pregnancy until late Novembre when the fertilised eggs move to the uterus..

    Two months after the cubs are born, in mid Winter in the den.

    I hope you enjoyed the video .. Mamma and cub ,interacting are so adorable.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Excellent
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Hello Poet

First let me congratulate you on that word "clime". It's a great word to get your meaning across with this little beauty. Love the video too of the bears. Format and subject matter awesome as well. Great job. Good luck in your contest.

xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
    Thank you so much for the lovely review!

    I'm glad you liked the video ..
    I wanted to present Winter from a different angle.

    I find it amazing that a female bear will get pregnant in June but then her body will put on holt the whole pregnancy until late Novembre when the fertilised eggs move to the uterus..

    Two months after the cubs are born in mid Winter in the den.